Alfred Berggren Poet Rhyme

When First We Met

This poem is a really a Rondelet

When first we met
my heart skipped a beat and I smiled
When first we met
I thought I should leave, but not yet
She seemed like an innocent child
This girl in her teens sweet and mild
When first we met

6-22-18

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Eve Roper June 27, 2018 at 7:41 PM Congratulations on your win, Alfred Hugs Eve ~`* Alfred Berggren June 27, 2018 at 9:21 PM Thank,Eve.

Susan Gentry June 26, 2018 at 12:39 AM Congratulations on your win. Well done! :) Alfred Berggren June 26, 2018 at 1:08 PM Thanks, Susan.

Arturo Michael June 26, 2018 at 12:20 AM Nice

Silent One June 25, 2018 at 7:12 AM I hope she is still sweet and mild Alfred.. Congratulations on your placement in the contest.. Alfred Berggren June 26, 2018 at 1:09 PM Thanks, Silent One.