When Fate Decides

When fate decides to bring you love
Clouds moved to show the stars above

You the crowning jewel of the stratosphere
Your breath of incense pervade the atmosphere 

None to compare at such radiant comeliness 
If I should fail you I crave your forgiveness

I’d be heartbroken if I should ever lose you
Because I feel I am wearing the luckiest shoe

I thank fate that of all I was the chosen one
To reciprocate the love of one second to none

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012



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Date: 10/5/2012 10:16:00 PM
btw, thanks so much for my win in your contest. I enjoyed seeing again this poem of yours.
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Date: 10/1/2012 10:00:00 PM
This is beautiful, Joy! I'm feeling the expression of joy in your well written Couplet. So glad I took the time to come and visit tonight! Much love, Annalise
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Date: 9/29/2012 3:06:00 PM
Sweetly written dear Joy! Love is the answer... big hugs, Jack xxx
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Date: 9/22/2012 6:01:00 PM
lovely Joy,sure it was fate,sounds like something sent from heaven lol
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Joy Wellington
Date: 9/24/2012 1:21:00 AM
Tnx Rich!
Date: 9/20/2012 7:50:00 AM
To be chosen is to love the one who has chosen even more..This applies to God and humankind..This one spoke to me in the Spirit..Sara
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Joy Wellington
Date: 9/24/2012 1:21:00 AM
I hear you Sara...blessings!
Date: 9/19/2012 12:48:00 PM
Joy; this is one good poem. I really enjoyed reading. Thank you for sharing. I read one poem that I have here at my Mom's Wake. ( For The Ones I Love) I made copies and my daughter passed them out after The poem was read. On the paper I put praying hands on each corner and on top In the middle I put my Moms picture. The poem is here. Lucilla
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Joy Wellington
Date: 9/19/2012 9:48:00 PM
I will be reading that poem along with others. I had done that with one that I asked my husband to write, for a lady that I considered my second mother. I didn't have enough, everyone wanted one. Thanks for reading and commenting. One love. Joy Wells
Date: 9/19/2012 7:43:00 AM
yours is a very lovely addition to the collection here of poetic wedding vows. Sorry my poem reflected your heartache of the past. I usually am writing just fiction but it's nice that you could relate to it!!
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Joy Wellington
Date: 9/19/2012 10:05:00 PM
Thanks for your kind comments Andrea!
Date: 9/19/2012 6:56:00 AM
What a beautifully wondrous write my friend! This is one of the most tender poems that I've read in a while, you have brought a smile to my face with this write! I really enjoyed this clever poem that I've read this morning! What a harmonious piece, Great Work!!
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Joy Wellington
Date: 9/19/2012 10:06:00 PM
Thanks Russell...appreciate the comments!
Date: 9/19/2012 6:54:00 AM
love this, wonderful positive poem Joy!!!
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Joy Wellington
Date: 9/19/2012 10:07:00 PM
Thanks Harry!
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