When Fate Decides

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)( )( Fate’s Decision when fate decides to bring you love, your heart will fly as lovely as a dove seems as if your soul had reached a throne of gold underneath the rainbow of great happiness unfold
when two hearts cling together as one making sacred vow for a very strong bond for better or worst, ‘til death do us part, in sickness and in health, the loveliest thing from mouth to heart as colorful butterflies spread their wings crowning you both with joy and bountiful blessings applause will be on air wishing you both hope and success as two hearts build a family hoping to live in a home of bliss but when fate decides to bring you love it’ s not always like a fairy tale now just like a tall wedding cake that loses its shape when love is not nourished and nurtured by two people who share
Written: Sept. 12,2012 Eleventh Place Contest: When Fate Decides (Wedding Poem) Contest Judged: 9/30/2012 Poet Sponsor: Janette Fisher Note: I tried to make a Wedding Cake Poem
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Date: 10/3/2012 11:22:00 AM
Wonderful write Leonora....congrats on your win! Hugs
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Date: 10/3/2012 1:13:00 AM
Thank you so much for your congratulatory comments!! More power and blessings to you always!! love/hugs:) LG
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Date: 10/1/2012 3:26:00 PM
another win!! Awesome, my friend, and congratulations.
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Date: 10/1/2012 6:29:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Janette's "When Fate Decides" contest Leonora. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/30/2012 5:39:00 PM
congrats on your win Leonora
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Date: 9/30/2012 1:57:00 PM
Terrific shape poem - congratulations on your win.
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Date: 9/14/2012 8:44:00 AM
The whole sounds great, it's the parts that get us into trouble as you so aptly tell. Relationships don't always pan out as you describe in your ending. Luv, Lizzie
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Date: 9/13/2012 8:59:00 PM
Leonora, I see the shape,,, and the image is fascinating... very cute and pretty... i'm very weak when it comes wedding cakes.... good luck.. always~ PD
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Date: 9/13/2012 10:37:00 AM
wow!!! another excellent poem from my dear friend!! I like it..advance congratulations!!! good luck!! muah!!! (^_^) God bless!!
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Date: 9/13/2012 7:39:00 AM
I like the image at the top....and great work!
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Len Gasun
Date: 9/13/2012 9:10:00 AM
thank you very my dear friend, Doris. I tried to form my poem like a Big Wedding Cake, too; but I don't know if it really looks like a wedding cake LOL.
Date: 9/13/2012 7:10:00 AM
A poem with a lot of word of truth. You have written it in a beautiful way, Leonora. - Have a nice day. / / oxox love Anne-Lise :)
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Len Gasun
Date: 9/13/2012 9:12:00 AM
thank you very much, Anne-Lise!
Date: 9/12/2012 8:54:00 PM
Good one, and I see you left us with a warning message. I used that same thought and I'm glad you did too, because so few couples seem to "get" it. All couples need to take a CLASS on how to keep love nourished, don't you agree???
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Len Gasun
Date: 9/13/2012 12:10:00 AM
Thanks for taking your time reading my poem Andrea. Yes, I think so. In our community sometimes a seminar for couples and in church we have an organization called Couples for Christ. God bless!
Date: 9/12/2012 10:16:00 AM
Leonora; thank you so much for sharing such a beautiful poem with us. Fate will decide what to do with our lives. Many blessings. Lucilla
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Date: 9/12/2012 6:43:00 AM
Love this Leonora, and that second line 4th stanza is a very important one and must never be overlooked, well done xx
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Date: 9/12/2012 5:22:00 AM
wow this powerful, Leonora, and so much truth in what you write.... love how you build this poem up, with the first three stanza on how it should be when two poeple work together, then the explosive last stanza, that said it all.. wonderful just wonderful...
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