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When Fate Decides

When fate decides to bring you love
You share it with me, feeling from above

I desire always your heart to be true
Time dictates just how great we grew

I seek your longing to be with my heart
For our life-long commitment never to part

I love you, fate has brought us together
And I accept this union, separation never

Always and true, we’ll stay together long
That’s how far our hearts sing this song

Entrant into Janette Fisher's "When Fate Decides" contest

9/6/2012

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Rhonda Johnson-Saunders Date: 9/7/2012 6:16:00 AM You really rose to the challenge of this one, Russell! I love how you described the eternal union of marriage so romantically. I'm still thinking how to write a poem about marriage without the mention of God. You have inspired me to give it a try...thanks for your always uplifting comments. I, too, love autumn. Though in Florida, I don't get the beautiful colors. I make up for it by decorating inside. I visit the pumpkin patch and buy flowers in seasonal colors. It all helps! Hugs, Rhonda Login to Reply

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl Date: 9/7/2012 6:15:00 AM Should do well in the contest Russell, very nice xx Login to Reply