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When Fate Decides

When fate decides to bring you love You share it with me, feeling from above I desire always your heart to be true Time dictates just how great we grew I seek your longing to be with my heart For our life-long commitment never to part I love you, fate has brought us together And I accept this union, separation never Always and true, we’ll stay together long That’s how far our hearts sing this song
Entrant into Janette Fisher's "When Fate Decides" contest 9/6/2012

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 9/7/2012 6:16:00 AM
You really rose to the challenge of this one, Russell! I love how you described the eternal union of marriage so romantically. I'm still thinking how to write a poem about marriage without the mention of God. You have inspired me to give it a try...thanks for your always uplifting comments. I, too, love autumn. Though in Florida, I don't get the beautiful colors. I make up for it by decorating inside. I visit the pumpkin patch and buy flowers in seasonal colors. It all helps! Hugs, Rhonda
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Date: 9/7/2012 6:15:00 AM
Should do well in the contest Russell, very nice xx
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