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When Faith Returns:

When faith in mankind is gone, What faith then belongs? So I went to Aura Vale Lake today, To lay around, swim and play. Sitting below the weeping willow trees, With that warm summer's breeze, I began to feel one with nature, Its essence I felt, I could capture. My faith itself then had returned, Not in man himself, that would be absurd, So I went for a quick dip in the lake, Swam with the ducks and the male drakes. The water refreshing and very cool, I prefer fresh water than any pool, Again I was feeling one with nature, But had forgotten my pen and paper. Just as well I thought to myself, For this was more for my spiritual health, I could not leave this adventure prematurely, Not even for poetry, I thought surely!
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Bangalee Avatar
February 13, 2023 at 8:00 PM
great write; I enjoyed your poetic thought
James Avatar
January 30, 2017 at 4:45 AM
Enjoyed your write...well done!
Wolf Avatar
January 30, 2017 at 7:19 AM
Thanks, James /|\
Smith Avatar
January 17, 2017 at 2:23 PM
I cant wait for the warm weather and our trips to the lakes and rivers. You descriptions were wonderful.
Wolf Avatar
January 17, 2017 at 5:53 PM
I'm going away to another lake this weekend too! Thanks, Tim /|\
Robinson Jr. Avatar
January 17, 2017 at 12:40 PM
A wonderfully spiritual poem, WW. Having your faith return was the best part of a beautiful day you just described. Real vibrant and inspiring poem, my Aussie friend. Loved it. Love and joy to you.
Wolf Avatar
January 17, 2017 at 5:52 PM
Thanks, RW /|\
White Avatar
January 17, 2017 at 12:00 AM
Man, Budgie, that sounds just so lovely, and you were right not to do anything else than enjoy that moment on that day. Love this poem, wish I could have joined.
Wolf Avatar
January 17, 2017 at 5:51 PM
Me too /|\
Roper Avatar
January 16, 2017 at 8:43 PM
To have days like this would be nice. Love your your poem :-)
Wolf Avatar
January 16, 2017 at 8:45 PM
Thank you, Eve /|\
Rodrigues Avatar
January 16, 2017 at 7:55 PM
What a lovely day! We all need a break into the real life!
Wolf Avatar
January 16, 2017 at 8:03 PM
Yes it was, thanks for stopping by, Kim /|\
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