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When Eyes Close

When eyes close with a force pushing a large stone on a current of a stream flowing glowing showing somethings balanced somethings hidden on a needle tip spreading on the eyes of a thousand lashes each dripping a single tear of fortitude

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Beata Agustin

Date: 12/6/2024 8:23:00 PM

Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 3/16/2016 11:35:00 PM

well done, Omer...LINDA

Skat A

Date: 1/14/2016 11:05:00 PM

OMER, Awesome write, I really like this. Forever ** SKAT **

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 12/19/2012 10:53:00 AM

A belated but warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you today Omer. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. Hoping you find even more inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. Thank you for sharing your writing with us and have a wonderful weekend. Love, Carol