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When Eyes Close

When eyes close with a force pushing a large stone on a current of a stream flowing glowing showing somethings balanced somethings hidden on a needle tip spreading on the eyes of a thousand lashes each dripping a single tear of fortitude

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 3/16/2016 11:35:00 PM
well done, Omer...LINDA
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Date: 1/14/2016 11:05:00 PM
OMER, Awesome write, I really like this. Forever ** SKAT **
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Date: 12/19/2012 10:53:00 AM
A belated but warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you today Omer. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. Hoping you find even more inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. Thank you for sharing your writing with us and have a wonderful weekend. Love, Carol
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