When Eyes Close
When eyes close
with a force
pushing
a large stone
on a current
of a stream
flowing
glowing
showing
somethings balanced
somethings hidden
on a needle tip
spreading on the eyes
of a thousand lashes
each dripping
a single tear
of fortitude
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