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When Earth Is Chastised By Rain

She exhales her guilt
After sordid tears of remorse
Her conscience is rinsed.

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Carol Sunshine Brown

December 23, 2009 at 3:35 AM

Congratulations on being a first round survivor Oluwaseun and the best to you in the finals. I wish you the best in your writing endeavors in 2010 whatever they may be. Love, Carol

P Sheart

December 21, 2009 at 9:37 AM

Congrats on your poem winning the first round of PS contest!! Very well deserved, enjoyed reading your wonderful poetry. Here’s wishing you a very Merry Christmas and a Happy New Year!! May 2010 be your best year ever! Love Light Patty

James Fraser

December 20, 2009 at 11:39 AM

Many congratulations on reaching the second round with your fine poem >> James

Carol Sunshine Brown

December 1, 2009 at 4:52 AM

Congratulations on your excellent poem being featured this week Oluwaseun. May you have many more. Love, Carol

Debbie Guzzi

November 30, 2009 at 4:25 PM

very interesting personification! Light & Love

Robin Maughan

November 30, 2009 at 11:51 AM

Great feature! I love Haikus! Hugs, Robin

James Fraser

November 30, 2009 at 11:34 AM

Many congratulations on your poem being featured >> James

John Freeman

November 30, 2009 at 9:00 AM

Beautiful Haiku, Oluwaseun. Congratulation on your feature, this week. Sincerely, Moses

Anthony Nutter

November 30, 2009 at 5:42 AM

Excellente write. Congratulations on having your poem featured this week. A. W. www.freewebs.com/abcedit

Nicole Sharon Brown

November 29, 2009 at 6:56 PM

Aweaome write ! congrats on being featured!

November 29, 2009 at 2:56 PM

Interesting perspective captured in just three lines. Congratulations on having your poem featured. Wishing you ongoing success with your writing. Karen