Anne-Lise Andresen Poet Free verse

- When Dreams Runs Out -

Warming thoughts cannot heal
In between those moments of words

When thought are not enough
My feet are shaking as I fall on my knees 

But my prayer was heard
I has no dreams left

Listening closely to the melody of life  
Into my failing grace, again I would follow life music

You've made my heart beat once again
and the sorrow in my soul existed in vain

A new step on the journey has begun
The storm gave birth to a rainbow




23.01.2015 
A-L Andresen :)
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Peter Lewis Holmes February 10, 2015 at 9:42 AM and the rainbow is the new you...tough and without bullshit or indecicision...nice write! Anne-Lise Andresen February 10, 2015 at 11:38 AM - Thank you for your interpretation Peter ............ very good word : "bullshit" // A-L

Len Gasun January 28, 2015 at 5:51 AM This is absolutely another very inspiring and fantastic poem from you my very dear friend, Anne Lise. I love it so much especially the last line. A fave. TYTYSSM. Thank you so much as well for your very inspiring and lovely comments and visit. Sorry, I was away for a week 'coz of Eng. Camps at the province of Thailand, very far from BKK. I've missed you so much too and the rests here. Sending my huge warmest hugs! <3 always and forever, Leonora Anne-Lise Andresen January 28, 2015 at 7:39 AM - Thanks my dear friend Leonora, for the nice visit, fav. and lovely comments on my poem: - When Dreams Runs Out - Highly appreciate your words :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Monterey Sirak January 27, 2015 at 7:00 AM This is simply fabulous! My favorite lines are "my prayer was heard.....the storm gave birth to a rainbow" Anne-Lise Andresen January 27, 2015 at 7:26 AM - Thanks Monterey, for the nice visit and lovely comments on my poem: - When Dreams Runs Out - Highly appreciate your words :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

D. Steel January 26, 2015 at 8:42 PM Wonderful poem Anne Lise! I enjoyed reading it immensely :) Thank you also for your kind words on my work. Looking forward to reading more of your poetry. - D. Steel Anne-Lise Andresen January 27, 2015 at 3:30 AM - D.Steel, thanks for the nice visit and lovely comments on my poem: - When Dreams Runs Out - Highly appreciate your words :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Mohammad Yamin January 26, 2015 at 3:26 PM Dear Anne, Your poem has touched my heart. A beautifully worded poem. It has charmed me. Love and good wishes. -Mohammad Anne-Lise Andresen January 27, 2015 at 3:29 AM - Thanks Mohammad, for the nice visit and lovely comments on my poem: - When Dreams Runs Out - Highly appreciate your words :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Vera Duggan January 26, 2015 at 12:41 AM How absolutly lovely Anne Lise, this was a beautiful read and flows so well, brilliant............Take care my dear and have a great day...........Vera......... Anne-Lise Andresen January 26, 2015 at 3:43 AM - Dear Vera, thanks for the nice visit and lovely comments on my poem: - When Dreams Runs Out - Highly appreciate your words :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Tim Ryerson January 25, 2015 at 7:08 PM I second Cheri's comment (May I have the next dance?) Anne-Lise Andresen January 26, 2015 at 3:41 AM - Thanks Tim, for the nice visit and lovely comments on my poem: - When Dreams Runs Out - Highly appreciate your words :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Cherl Dunn January 25, 2015 at 6:34 PM This almost sounds like a waltz put in a movements verse,totally loved it Anne Lise, it's just lovely dear lady, the last lines pull it all together so well, it flows so smoothly great job, cheri Anne-Lise Andresen January 26, 2015 at 3:43 AM - Cherl, thanks for the nice visit and lovely comments on my poem: - When Dreams Runs Out - Highly appreciate your words :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Nette Onclaud January 25, 2015 at 12:12 PM inspiring thoughts on a beautiful sunday, anne... this is truly a joy to read.. wonderful!.. huggs Anne-Lise Andresen January 26, 2015 at 3:41 AM - Thanks Nette, for the nice visit and lovely comments on my poem: - When Dreams Runs Out - Highly appreciate your words :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Shane Cooper January 25, 2015 at 6:10 AM Beautiful words Anne Lise. The imagery of a rainbow is truly divine. I will put it in my favourites. Love Shane xxx Anne-Lise Andresen January 25, 2015 at 6:34 AM - Thanks Shane, for the nice visit, fav. and lovely comments on my poem: - When Dreams Runs Out - Highly appreciate your words :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Demetrios Trifiatis January 25, 2015 at 4:33 AM A message of hope: After the storm comes the sun! Beautifully expressed, dear Anne-Lise! Anne-Lise Andresen January 25, 2015 at 5:44 AM - Demetrios, thanks for the nice visit and lovely comments on my poem: - When Dreams Runs Out - Highly appreciate your words :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Eve Roper January 24, 2015 at 11:27 PM Anne-Lise, inspiration is blessed with desire, and the desire is felt in this poem. Beautiful write a 7 ++ Anne-Lise Andresen January 25, 2015 at 5:44 AM - Thanks Eve, for the nice visit and lovely comments on my poem: - When Dreams Runs Out - Highly appreciate your words :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Debbie Guzzi January 24, 2015 at 7:20 PM uplifting content, Light & Love Anne-Lise Andresen January 25, 2015 at 5:43 AM - Debbie, thanks for the nice visit and lovely comments on my poem: - When Dreams Runs Out - Highly appreciate your words :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Rose Raikos January 24, 2015 at 5:18 PM I can hear myself in these words, we all stumble and fall. But that picking up from the fall is a true blessing, the rainbow feeling. great Poem. Thanks from, Rose of Words. Anne-Lise Andresen January 25, 2015 at 5:42 AM - Thanks Rose, for the nice visit and lovely comments on my poem: - When Dreams Runs Out - Highly appreciate your words :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Arlene Smith January 24, 2015 at 4:49 PM Last line was icing on a beautiful cake, sweew Anne... Hugs.. Arlene Anne-Lise Andresen January 25, 2015 at 5:42 AM - Thanks Arlene, for the nice visit and lovely comments on my poem: - When Dreams Runs Out - Highly appreciate your words :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Sara Kendrick January 24, 2015 at 2:33 PM The storm gave birth to a rainbow and isn't that wonderful when we can experience the rainbow..Thanks for the visit to my page..I enjoyed reading this one..Sara Anne-Lise Andresen January 24, 2015 at 3:26 PM - Thanks Sara, for the nice visit and lovely comments on my poem: - When Dreams Runs Out - Highly appreciate your words :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Paul Callus January 24, 2015 at 8:13 AM So glad that your dreams became reality, Anne Lise! Follow the rainbow and leave the darkness behind. All the best. /x/ paul Anne-Lise Andresen January 24, 2015 at 9:00 AM - Paul, thanks for the nice visit and lovely comments on my poem: - When Dreams Runs Out - Highly appreciate your words :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Joseph May January 24, 2015 at 7:58 AM Beautiful write Anne... and a lovely ending....have a great weekend...hugs Anne-Lise Andresen January 24, 2015 at 9:00 AM - Thanks Joseph, for the nice visit and lovely comments on my poem: - When Dreams Runs Out - Highly appreciate your words :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Liam Mcdaid January 24, 2015 at 7:05 AM love how this painted to the powerful ending anne lise golden pen dear friend Anne-Lise Andresen January 24, 2015 at 7:42 AM - Liam, thanks for the nice visit and lovely comments on my poem: - When Dreams Runs Out - Highly appreciate your words :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Scott Thirtyseven January 23, 2015 at 9:39 PM Love that last line, compliments a delightful poem. Anne-Lise Andresen January 24, 2015 at 6:18 AM - Thanks for the nice visit and lovely comments on my poem: - When Dreams Runs Out - Highly appreciate your words, Scott :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Dorian Petersen Potter January 23, 2015 at 4:58 PM Very nice pen Anne-Lise! Very beautiful piece my dearest friend. There's always a light at the end of any tunnel and God always answers our prayers and prayer was answered. I love this poem a lot. its like a journey from darkness to light and the positivity in the last 2 couplets, especially in the last one, is the best, so full of promises in that the storm gave birth to a beautiful rainbow.A 7 +++ from me! Have a lovely evening Anne! :) Love and hugs! xxoxxxox D. ^O^ Anne-Lise Andresen January 24, 2015 at 6:18 AM - Thanks for the nice visit and lovely comments on my poem: - When Dreams Runs Out - Highly appreciate your words, Dorian :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Frederic Parker January 23, 2015 at 4:10 PM A prayer answered a page now turns as the next chapter begins...peace be with you my poetic friend Anne-Lise Andresen January 24, 2015 at 6:17 AM - Thanks for the nice visit and lovely comments on my poem: - When Dreams Runs Out - Highly appreciate your words, Frederic :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Poesy Relish January 23, 2015 at 3:22 PM Awakening to Gods very existence is described well in these few lines... nice write Anne-Lise, love.. nad! Anne-Lise Andresen January 24, 2015 at 6:16 AM - Thanks for the nice visit and lovely comments on my poem: - When Dreams Runs Out - Highly appreciate your words, Nadiya :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Jan Allison January 23, 2015 at 2:38 PM I love the positivity in the final couplet and the wonderful imagery in the final line - awesome:-) A 7 from me:-) hugs jan xx Anne-Lise Andresen January 24, 2015 at 6:16 AM - Thanks for the nice visit and lovely comments on my poem: - When Dreams Runs Out - Highly appreciate your words, Jan - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Bl Devnath January 23, 2015 at 2:08 PM "But my prayers was heard I had no dreams left" means you have truly surrendered. What God wants, let Him do. Nice not only but more than nice means extreme beauty of your heart it's. Done well my lovely friend. 7 i feel simply. Loved always,bl Anne-Lise Andresen January 24, 2015 at 6:15 AM - Thanks for the nice visit and lovely comments on my poem: - When Dreams Runs Out - Highly appreciate your words,Bl - oxox // Anne-Lise :)