Vijay Pandit Poet Rhyme

When Dreams and Reality Rhyme

Real as a ruby dawn twinkling on morning dew
Tiptoeing in splendorous view, enticing anew
Golden smile of sun sparkling on skyline blue,
An imprint of my love, so beauteous and true
This moment that woos, this moment’s all you.

Let me save it from vagrant vagaries of mind,
Protect it from withering in seasons unkind,
Treasuring benevolence its eloquence defined
This moment of mine at the peak of its prime
Let me grab it before it takes the shape of time.

When its journey on wings of love had just begun
Oh! how seductively its tender passions spun
Clues of romance from rhythms of your heart
Rejoicing musings our indulgent souls impart
Imploring fondly to never let this moment depart.

Dwell not in the yesteryears that passed us by,
Let the halo of its aura revive gleam in your eyes
Enticing you to be mine, this moment is sublime,
Oh, how in its realm, dreams and reality rhyme!
Let me grab it before it takes the shape of time.

Written: June 15, 2021
Submitted on December 14, 2022 to:
2022 Poetry Marathon Mile 23 Poetry Contest


Poem of the day on June 16,2021
Placed 1st: All yours (June 17) by Brian Strand

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Paula Goldsmith July 21, 2021 at 11:05 AM I just found this lovely story/write. What a wonderful ending. Have a blessed day writing away................. Vijay Pandit July 21, 2021 at 1:24 PM Thank you Paula--much appreciate.

Aniruddha Pathak July 16, 2021 at 11:43 PM 'Let me grab it before it takes the shape of time.' What a beautiful end-line to end a lovely poem! Vijay Pandit July 21, 2021 at 1:24 PM Thank you, Aniruddha--much appreciate.

Smita Kulkarni July 15, 2021 at 1:17 PM Marvelously expressed Vijay! Loved the line "Let me grab it before it takes the shape of time". Vijay Pandit July 21, 2021 at 1:23 PM Much appreciate Smita--many thanks.

Heidi Sands July 12, 2021 at 10:37 AM Congrats Vijay for #2 on best New poem list :) Vijay Pandit July 21, 2021 at 1:23 PM Thank you Heidi--much appreciate.

Aniruddha Pathak July 7, 2021 at 12:09 AM Once again this is to congratulate for being among the top poems, a great credit I believe. Vijay Pandit July 21, 2021 at 1:23 PM Thank you Aniruddha--much appreciate.

Jennifer Proxenos July 4, 2021 at 9:31 AM Vijay, you never fail to come up with the best, this poem is outrageously stupendous and first win, I never expected less as I never read comments before the poem. Bravo my friend, hugs and blessings, Jennifer. Vijay Pandit July 21, 2021 at 1:22 PM Thank you my friend. Much appreciate your kind remarks.

Anna Marie Kaianah June 24, 2021 at 5:24 PM What a lovely poem, well written. Congratulations on your first place win! ~Anna Vijay Pandit June 25, 2021 at 7:42 AM Much appreciate Anna--many thanks.

Andrea Dietrich June 24, 2021 at 5:22 PM the last two lines. Wow!! And the title you used. It really captures this poem's essence. Vijay Pandit June 25, 2021 at 7:41 AM Thank you Andrea. Much appreciate.

Arturo Michael June 24, 2021 at 7:37 AM You danced right through this...Well done. Congratulations Vijay Pandit on POTD. Vijay Pandit June 24, 2021 at 11:59 AM Much appreciate Arturo--many thanks.

Sandra Adams June 24, 2021 at 7:32 AM wow... so beautifully romantic, i can see why it was poem of the day, congratulations on that...i love everything about this one! hugs Vijay Pandit June 24, 2021 at 11:59 AM Glad to see you again, Sandy. Much appreciate--many thanks.

Anne-Lise Andresen June 23, 2021 at 5:25 AM - A poem that excels in beauty with p.o.t.d. and a well deserved first place in the contest ... - A moment in sublime, congratulations Vijay :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Vijay Pandit June 24, 2021 at 11:58 AM So very kind of you Anne-Lise. Glad you are feeling better. Much appreciate --many thanks.

Mystic Rose Rose June 22, 2021 at 9:39 AM Oh, how in its realm, dreams and reality rhyme! Let me grab it before it takes the shape of time. How I love it when dreams and reality rhyme, you have written pure harmony Vijay, every word sings of beauty:) Vijay Pandit June 24, 2021 at 11:57 AM Much appreciate my friend--many thanks, Vienna.

Christuraj Alex June 22, 2021 at 6:01 AM Really Beautiful. Vijay Pandit June 24, 2021 at 11:57 AM Thank you--much appreciate.

Kim Rodrigues June 21, 2021 at 7:13 AM Such a romantic! Hooked from the first verse, dear Vijay! Congratulations on POTD! Vijay Pandit June 24, 2021 at 11:57 AM Glad to read your comments, Kim--much appreciate--many thanks.

Andrea Dietrich June 20, 2021 at 11:10 AM a beauty, and congrats on POTD! Vijay Pandit June 24, 2021 at 11:56 AM Thank you Andrea--much appreciate.

Joanna Daniel June 19, 2021 at 4:33 AM Beautiful poem, Vijay, congrats on POTD:) Vijay Pandit June 19, 2021 at 5:17 AM Thank you Jo.

Supraja Kannan June 19, 2021 at 2:35 AM Congratulations on your well deserved POTD... Such an uplifting write... Vijay Pandit June 19, 2021 at 5:17 AM Thank you Supraja.

Aniruddha Pathak June 18, 2021 at 6:45 AM To come again... and it was a POTD as well... and why not, I was wondering all along on reading it, congrats again Vijay Pandit June 19, 2021 at 5:16 AM So very kind of you Aniruddha--much appreciate.

Aniruddha Pathak June 18, 2021 at 6:42 AM Dreams and reality really rhyme here, and beautifully so, and a deserving first place Vijay Pandit June 19, 2021 at 5:16 AM Much appreciate--many thanks.

Heidi Sands June 18, 2021 at 4:16 AM Congratulations for your win Vijay :) Vijay Pandit June 18, 2021 at 6:21 AM Thank you Heidi--much appreciate.

Connie Marcum Wong June 18, 2021 at 2:40 AM Oh Vijay, I just love this gorgeous poem! I am so happy to see it has been honored with POTD. Congratulations to you my friend. This golden gem is going into my Faves! Blessings xxoo Vijay Pandit June 18, 2021 at 6:20 AM Thank you my friend for your uplifting comments. Always a joy to read your remarks. Many thanks, Connie. And a special thank you for the FAVE.

Paul Callus June 18, 2021 at 2:31 AM Congratulations on p.o.t.d. award, Vijay! This beautiful poem definitely deserves praise and recognition. With your poetic words you certainly are capable of turning any dream into reality!! ~ Regards // paul Vijay Pandit June 18, 2021 at 6:19 AM So very kind of you. Much appreciate your visit and comments, Paul. Many thanks. Regards.

Besma Riabi Dziri June 17, 2021 at 5:14 AM You have wonderfully carved your very rubies of rarity! Poetry dipped into a most sublime sentiment.. Poetry that ascends to the magic of fairy dreams that lends itself to the possibilities of a carpe diem reality! A Poetry that earns the honour and recognition! Congratulations dear Vijay on your POTD honour! A great delight to read! My deepest regards and blessings. Vijay Pandit June 18, 2021 at 6:19 AM Always a joy to read your comments, Besma. Much appreciate your kind remarks. Many thanks. Regards.

Anitha Jayasankar June 16, 2021 at 11:31 PM What a beautiful poem... with a fantastic title... Hearty congrats on your POTD Vijayji... God bless.. ~ Ani Vijay Pandit June 17, 2021 at 4:55 AM Thank you Ani. Glad you stopped by with your kind feedback--much appreciate.

Eve Roper June 16, 2021 at 7:53 PM Dear Vijay, another outstanding verse. Congratulations on POTD. Hugs Eve Vijay Pandit June 17, 2021 at 4:55 AM Glad you stopped by Eve. Much appreciate your kind remarks. Many thanks.

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