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When Doves Cry In Maui

The fires they breach far and wide yet leaving no nest not low or high the closer it gets the farther we fly wind swept smoke clouding the eyes distance by distance higher the height homes all gone as we struggle for life sometimes surrounded, safety in flight leaving those behind who could not fight Land for a moment till heats comes nigh then keep going or else die no creature is spared behind in sight a burning retreat required requite in the darkness of night fleeing the light that consumes all in it's way the closer it gets panic and fits it causes without delay through it all that endless request we make from day to day grant us life a way to live and a way to get away It cannot burn the ocean and it cannot burn the sand a wall of safety so secure till fuel is turned to ashes the terror is past and we've been asked is there anything left behind then and there at that moment I knew when doves cry

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Date: 8/30/2023 12:47:00 PM
Are you writing from experience here? if so my Thoughts and prayers are with you, as my Thoughts are with all there.' A terrible event I Hear that nearly eighty people are under arrest In Greece, for arson re the wildfires there pure Ecological terrorisam I reckon.'
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Date: 8/15/2023 7:13:00 AM
this is well executed in every line where the poet walks...i well remember after 9/11 criticism of poets who wrote about it saying if they were not there they had no voice...Tennyson and The Charge of the Light Brigade comes to mind....this is why poets write, the quills that speak for the heart and paint the landscape...excellent job
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Date: 8/21/2023 2:55:00 PM
Thanks this is exactly what I'd hoped I'd get.
Date: 8/15/2023 7:06:00 AM
It’s so sad. May your words offer some measure of comfort. We have a lot of fires happening here in BC but nothing can compare with what they have gone Through.
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Date: 8/14/2023 8:09:00 PM
It’s just heartbreaking. Great write, TS
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Date: 8/14/2023 9:13:00 AM
Your words are filled with emotion. A sad reminder for us all that disaster can strike anytime and anywhere.
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Date: 8/14/2023 7:14:00 AM
A tragedy --tremendous loss of property and life. You speak for us all.
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Date: 8/13/2023 4:22:00 AM
The situation in Maui had to have been horrible for those facing it. It is awesome that many survived, but horrible for the families those who did not make it. So many are faced with such serious life decisions for the future. There seems to be such love and compassion from the people who live there so I know that those who were affected will have support in this situation. Thanks for sharing this one with us and for dropping by my page. Sara
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Date: 8/12/2023 5:25:00 PM
So sad! God bless you. Love, Gina
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