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Written on July 31, 2023

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Rain pours down over the hills, like God’s tears Jewels peppering petals, impulsive Lightening rages in skies, bleeding fears Wonders so amazing they’re compulsive Jewels peppering petals, impulsive Skating along roses, a faint pleasure Wonders so amazing they’re compulsive Creating hope in hearts, beyond measure Skating along roses, a faint pleasure Reflecting joy descending with showers Creating hope in hearts, beyond measure Nourishing the oaks, pines, all the flowers Reflecting joy descending with showers Risking all to abide in His sweet grace Nourishing the oaks, pines, all the flowers Knowing beautiful beyond any place Risking all to abide in His sweet grace Singing like stardust glistens, secret love Knowing beautiful beyond any place Soft light flowing down from heaven above Singing like stardust glistens, secret love Painting souls in music from falling rain Soft light flowing down from heaven above Here is more love than a heart can contain Painting souls in music from falling rain Lightening rages in skies, bleeding fears Here is more love than a heart can contain Rain pours down over the hills, like God’s tears

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Date: 9/6/2023 7:55:00 PM
This is just beautiful and I absolutely love it! A fav :)
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Date: 8/25/2023 5:29:00 AM
Creative work. SK
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Date: 8/18/2023 8:31:00 PM
Wow you are definitely a queen of pantoums absolutely loveeee this pantoum especially your chosen refrains
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Date: 8/1/2023 9:28:00 AM
An over flow of emotion so well penned Regina, you created a master piece xo
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Date: 7/31/2023 6:23:00 AM
Skating along roses… Nourishing the oaks, pines, all the flowers… Rain pours down over the hills, like God’s tears. A lovely right, dear Gina!
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