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When Do You Become An Adult

When Do You Become An Adult?
A Fight With Mother

Mother!
I need 
to hang 
up or   
I might 
well say 
something 
I'll be 
sorry
about.

3/1/2018
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Gupta Avatar
March 2, 2018 at 7:01 AM
A great write, Eve ...
Gauthier Avatar
March 1, 2018 at 10:42 PM
A delightful poem, Eve. We are all so darn human!
Raynes Avatar
March 1, 2018 at 9:49 PM
i wish my step daughter would give warning like this to her mum, great write Eve :)
Roper Avatar
March 1, 2018 at 9:58 PM
Thank you, Lewis, my mom is 86, and here lately has been saying very meaning things so I have been having to end my conversations before I blow up... and I don't think it dementia :(
Pigeon Tart Avatar
March 1, 2018 at 8:46 PM
Sharp one! Well done.
Dietrich Avatar
March 1, 2018 at 8:16 PM
I like your poem, Eve. And the picture going with it!
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