Home » Poems » Deb M » When Death Decides

When Death Decides

Death shows no consideration No regard for age or time No idea of inconvenience Death will never change its mind Death does not discriminate nor negotiate Has no favourites, feels no sorrow When death comes for you There will be no tomorrow

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 1/13/2025 1:36:00 PM

I believe there will be a tomorrow my sweet Deb...in one fashion or another. Death is but a door. :)

Deb M
Date: 1/14/2025 2:12:00 PM

I like that very much ‘death is but a door’ a positive way of looking at death! Glad you are back…..missed that little owl hehe! Debx

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 1/11/2025 2:02:00 AM

Death is terrible. Few think about it. At my age, it is like a spectre for me. But after death, there is a new life.

Deb M
Date: 1/12/2025 4:49:00 PM

I think many think about it Victor….especially those in their latter years! Thanks…Debx

Gershon Wolf

Date: 1/10/2025 1:41:00 PM

Words of wisdom. ~ Noah Scape

Deb M
Date: 1/12/2025 4:50:00 PM

BB Noah Scape l thank you! Debx

Ilene Bauer

Date: 1/10/2025 8:55:00 AM

Wise and well-said, Deb!

Deb M
Date: 1/12/2025 4:51:00 PM

Wise ole owl thats me ilene hehe! Thanks as always my friend! Debx

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 1/10/2025 6:54:00 AM

Well said, Deb, and yes, it will come. Some pretend or deny it, but it will surely come,

Deb M
Date: 1/12/2025 4:52:00 PM

Inevitable Kim and its never the right time!! Thanks…Debx

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 1/10/2025 5:52:00 AM

- Sad but true, Deb - Great written :) - Happy weekend :) - hugs

Deb M
Date: 1/12/2025 4:54:00 PM

Thanks lovely bright Sunshine! Debx

Tom Cunningham

Date: 1/10/2025 5:31:00 AM

When death comes knocking don't answer the door. But if he's determined he'll kick the door in anyway, no one gets out alive. Tom

Deb M
Date: 1/12/2025 4:53:00 PM

You made me laugh Tom! Death wears steel capped boots! Debx

Joe Maverick

Date: 1/10/2025 5:12:00 AM

Now death has been done..Well almost to death many Lines from writers, that take your breath.' Yet in my new life' thats been given by Him, for Jesus tells me true Life is now mine..and for my sins.? i sense the Power also feel real life divine.' I've put death far behind me..its just the world now that holds strife.'

Deb M
Date: 1/12/2025 4:56:00 PM

I like that Joe….’almost to death’ thats funny and clever! I appreciate your comment dear Joe! Debx

Paul Willason

Date: 1/10/2025 4:35:00 AM

I say try to keep moving...it's harder for the blighter to hit a moving target. A sober write my friend but undeniably true. Dare I say, 'cheers'...got to laugh at the executioner. Take care my friend...

Deb M
Date: 1/12/2025 4:51:00 PM

I like your words also Paul hehe….thanks …Debx

Joe Maverick
Date: 1/10/2025 5:05:00 AM

I like your words here Paul.'