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-When Death Decides


Death shows no consideration

No regard for age or time

No idea of inconvenience

Death will never change its mind


Death does not discriminate nor negotiate 

Has no favourites, feels no sorrow

When death comes for you

There will be no tomorrow

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Linda Alice Fowler

January 13, 2025 at 1:36 PM

I believe there will be a tomorrow my sweet Deb...in one fashion or another. Death is but a door. :)

Deb M

January 14, 2025 at 2:12 PM

I like that very much ‘death is but a door’ a positive way of looking at death! Glad you are back…..missed that little owl hehe! Debx

Victor Buhagiar

January 11, 2025 at 2:02 AM

Death is terrible. Few think about it. At my age, it is like a spectre for me. But after death, there is a new life.

Deb M

January 12, 2025 at 4:49 PM

I think many think about it Victor….especially those in their latter years! Thanks…Debx

Gershon Wolf

January 10, 2025 at 1:41 PM

Words of wisdom. ~ Noah Scape

Deb M

January 12, 2025 at 4:50 PM

BB Noah Scape l thank you! Debx

Ilene Bauer

January 10, 2025 at 8:55 AM

Wise and well-said, Deb!

Deb M

January 12, 2025 at 4:51 PM

Wise ole owl thats me ilene hehe! Thanks as always my friend! Debx

Kim Rodrigues

January 10, 2025 at 6:54 AM

Well said, Deb, and yes, it will come. Some pretend or deny it, but it will surely come,

Deb M

January 12, 2025 at 4:52 PM

Inevitable Kim and its never the right time!! Thanks…Debx

Anne-Lise Andresen

January 10, 2025 at 5:52 AM

- Sad but true, Deb - Great written :) - Happy weekend :) - hugs

Deb M

January 12, 2025 at 4:54 PM

Thanks lovely bright Sunshine! Debx

Tom Cunningham

January 10, 2025 at 5:31 AM

When death comes knocking don't answer the door. But if he's determined he'll kick the door in anyway, no one gets out alive. Tom

Deb M

January 12, 2025 at 4:53 PM

You made me laugh Tom! Death wears steel capped boots! Debx

Joe Maverick

January 10, 2025 at 5:12 AM

Now death has been done..Well almost to death many Lines from writers, that take your breath.' Yet in my new life' thats been given by Him, for Jesus tells me true Life is now mine..and for my sins.? i sense the Power also feel real life divine.' I've put death far behind me..its just the world now that holds strife.'

Deb M

January 12, 2025 at 4:56 PM

I like that Joe….’almost to death’ thats funny and clever! I appreciate your comment dear Joe! Debx

Paul Willason

January 10, 2025 at 4:35 AM

I say try to keep moving...it's harder for the blighter to hit a moving target. A sober write my friend but undeniably true. Dare I say, 'cheers'...got to laugh at the executioner. Take care my friend...

Deb M

January 12, 2025 at 4:51 PM

I like your words also Paul hehe….thanks …Debx

Joe Maverick

January 10, 2025 at 5:05 AM

I like your words here Paul.'