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When Death Came

As I walked in the icy corridor I feel his presents but can not see him. As i turn I see a dark figure "Hello" I question.... No answer.... his grip around my arm the sorrow and pain leaving me but the happiness is drained I want it back I want her back. He whispers in my ear "Don't fight you can't win" as I struggle I see the girl who holds in her hands my heart I get this burning in my chest "NOOO" he cries he knows he has been beat as the feeling comes back I see her and say "When death comes!!"

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Date: 2/18/2011 8:01:00 AM
I like it seems he has a painful feeling in his heart
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