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When Dawn Drifts Into Enchanted Meadows

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For Joseph May's Line Inspiration Poetry Contest

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*When Dawn drifts into enchanted meadows, listen to the choruses of birds’ song. Feel on your skin the wind that softly blows. Hear the crickets too which with birds chirp along. Right before Dawn has arrived, maybe she will paint the sky with orange, and I know sometimes you might be fortunate to see Dawn bringing to the landscape a warm glow. Lay yourself down on grass. See sky change blue. To be enchanted, meadows have flowers. Wild, they’ll be dancing when a breeze blows through. Enjoy their beauty in the morning hours. Before it gets too hot, come with me. We’ll gaze at clouds that shift like magic as we laze. *(based on line 5 given by Joseph May)

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Date: 5/7/2024 3:46:00 PM
.....Congratulations on the wun!
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Date: 5/7/2024 3:45:00 PM
Wow, nature's enchantment in this delightful poem. It reminds me of sitting on my patio in the yard watching the birds, insects, and our dogs. Wonderful weaving of words, Andrea. All the best to you. ~
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Date: 5/5/2024 2:03:00 PM
Congrats on your win Andrea, Very nicely penned
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Date: 5/4/2024 11:58:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your beautiful write. Have a blessed weekend............
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Date: 5/1/2024 8:01:00 AM
Andrea, herein you had me walking & laying down in soft beauty. What a splendid penning! xox sally
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Date: 4/30/2024 10:19:00 AM
Wow! This is beautiful! So soothing too to some extent! I really love the opening lines in this and how youv painted imagery in such a captivating manner! One of my most faves again from you sweet andrea. While i was gone youv been writing such beautiful poetry! A fave this is, best wishes for the contest
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Date: 4/30/2024 9:42:00 AM
Andrea, there's a lot to take in as the light of day begins to take hold. You capture many of the different features and provide a very pleasurable review of the dawn. It's something to take in over and over again. Makes this poem fun to read several times.
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Date: 4/29/2024 9:44:00 AM
Nice poem. Soothing and serene. Best for a win.
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Date: 4/29/2024 6:13:00 AM
Dear Andrea, Your poem envelops me in a serene embrace, inviting me to dance with the dawn and embrace the beauty of nature. I loved how it whispers of moments cherished, of tranquility found in the meadows where time slows and worries fade. Your words urge us to savor the fleeting magic of each sunrise. Yes, I need to pause, breathe, and be enchanted by the world around us. - Blessings, Daniel
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Date: 4/29/2024 5:40:00 AM
Ahhh!! A nice one, Andrea, for the contest. Reads like a good contender to me. Way to go. Thanks for sharing it with us and for dropping by my page. Sara K
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Date: 4/29/2024 1:43:00 AM
I have always admired your poems and the ease of rhyming, which is beyond me. To paint the sky orange! And dancing on the breeze. Brilliant. Best for a win. Hugs xx
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Date: 4/28/2024 7:39:00 PM
A beautiful sonnet, Andrea! Loved especially the last few lines....<3
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Date: 4/28/2024 5:17:00 PM
a beautifully soft and enchanting poem, Andrea! The Sonnet form was ideal. I especially liked 'clouds that shift like magic as we laze.' Best wishes with the contest, hugs, Sara
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