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When Darkness Falls

The air is warm, the sky is blue The trees are dancing in the wind The birds sing, the butterflies flutter Peace is all I feel The air is cold, the sky is crying Tears are dropping down like bombs The people scream and fall to their knees The birds are silent, the butterflies gone I don’t understand Then all is dark

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 3/10/2016 12:12:00 AM
nice to see this one again. LINDA
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Date: 5/3/2015 3:41:00 PM
Wonderful! Your style is nice
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Kassadee Acridge
Date: 5/5/2015 12:43:00 PM
Thank you!
Date: 4/25/2015 11:24:00 AM
Hi Kassadee.. powerful, well constructed write, my friend. Welcome to Poetry Soup, a great place to display your creative, artist works. It's also an ideal place to meet and be shaped by other poets. Comment on their works and they will comment on yours. Give any of the varied contest a try as well. I look forward to reading more good writes this month! Please take time to check me out, ok... PS.. If you have any questions about the Soup feel free to ask, just send me a Soup Mail. Talk soon!
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Kassadee Acridge
Date: 4/27/2015 12:18:00 PM
Thank you! And I love your icon, PENGUINS!!
Date: 4/24/2015 2:00:00 PM
WOW, this is dark... Love it! LINDA
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Kassadee Acridge
Date: 4/27/2015 12:17:00 PM
Thank you!