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When Dark Clouds Gather by M. Griswold 04062020 Dark clouds gathering, gathering around. Enticing you give up your moral resound. Drifting in and out of your inner thoughts. Tormenting you so, twining to little knots. Reaching down somewhere deep within. Are those dark clouds of doubting sin. As they envelope and sadden your soul. You struggle and search to regain control. Then, just when you think all's done and lost, you remember how much your soul has cost. Recalling the price for which you were bought. Is the key to victory over the dark clouds fought.

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Date: 4/25/2020 10:47:00 AM
Hello Mitchell Griswold, when dark clouds gather it is hard to get away from them. It is always a battle. It is a battle that is won. Enjoy your day my friend. Be saf5e.
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Date: 4/7/2020 10:22:00 AM
Your poetry is honorably beautiful and trustworthy, I enjoyed every word, Mitchell. Thank you for sharing your penmanship have a great day.
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