Nancy Jones Poet Rondeau Redouble

When Crystal Breaks

I like to cuss sometimes
ok, more like many times
when seems the hooty-toots
need bringin' down.

I'm not scared of you
and I'll trump your charm in that
I'll ride your yacht and eat
all your peanut butter, too.

Wiggle my teeth atcha
your kindness I'll never forget.

It's just me, you know
the one you love so

is livin' it as if
I'd never met you.

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Tim B November 3, 2011 at 8:05 PM Mrs. Nancy, you capture anger and resentment of the buorgeoisie so well. Rather made me chuckle, not that I share the sentiment entirely but your words are 'crystal clear' :)

Joe Maverick November 3, 2011 at 1:22 PM I like the different approach in this Nancy, good to read you today..

Tony Lane November 3, 2011 at 6:35 AM You are on fire. Push on. Tony

Gwendolen Song November 3, 2011 at 4:35 AM The other side of you is JUST as marvelous! Great write, Miss Nancy! Gwendolen

Nette Onclaud November 2, 2011 at 9:55 PM awhhh, a deep write that uses seemingly cognitive laguage for impact.. i like!! :) huggs!

Linda-Marie Sweetheart November 2, 2011 at 9:45 PM the title speaks volumes Nancy and honestly written luv..