When Calculating Distant Stars

Rain with blue sky commingles daylight into sun
Signals to the weather which way the wind climbs high
North is a birds favorite direction when singing with intent
Tiny brains are smart enough to find the south when seasons end
Flying past mountains held up on distant nights reflection
Sojourners hold it all together rightly so 
Watch your step when climbing upper altitudes alone
Don't slip or fall or go below zero
Folded snow remembers mounds of colder frost
That grows, that stops by Winter rivers path
Going outside is ridiculous when late 
In disguise, in blinding white, conditions dangerous
To count the stars, to shiver, to cover all contingencies of madness 
Carry a flash light filled with batteries
You can never have enough to see where it all started
Where it began when calculations came about
Down in the valley stars stand out
Are easier to touch if you stretch into the farthest reaches

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017



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Date: 1/30/2017 11:28:00 AM
- Nothing is more beautiful than a winter sky full of stars, Earl - I would not pick the stars ... they fit perfectly where they are - Great poem :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Earl Schumacker
Date: 1/30/2017 4:25:00 PM
Hi Anne-Lise, Thank you so much. Glad you liked it. Sorry I have not kept in touch with the community and with your works in recent times. I've had to deal with mortal matters and mortality. I'm back on track for the time being. Thanks again. Have a great day. Earl
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