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November 25, 2023
Placed 1st: When Butterflies Dance to Moon’s Song
Sponsor: Anoucheka Gangabissoon

Curving, swirling, in moonlit stance, butterflies merrily dance, Undulating tenor of nocturnal music, beneath stellar expanse, When celestial orchestra plays, occult notes of galactic tune, As titillations of love croon, mystical lyrics of melodious moon; Echoing doting rhythms, twinkling revelry of luminous stars, In realms magical, scintillating thrones of Venus and Mars, As longings of soul blossom, spurring reveries of romance, Where I decode latent missives, glinting your esoteric glance; Enamored in tones ambrosial, humming riffs of moon song, Cherishing sweet promise of love, reverberating lifelong, Exalting fantasies of awe, emanating from ethereal heart, Edifying ecstasies of morrow, as shadows of bygones depart; Enlivening themes longed for, in womb of romantic night, As we embrace paradise of passion, desires ecstatic ignite, Lauding refulgent beams of moon, glistening fervid space, When ardent images of grace, memories beloved retrace; Waltzing in airglow above, thrilling on wings of butterflies, Attuning to sound of music, resounding in lambent skies, Choreographing a ballet love, rowing aura of galactic stream, Enchanting sensuous theme vying shores of utopian dream.

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Paula Goldsmith

Date: 12/21/2023 6:57:00 AM

Congratulations on your win. WOW!!! Your "Butterflies" are an amazing write with a great ending. Love It... Merry Christmas..........

Heidi Sands

Date: 12/6/2023 6:51:00 AM

I love the last stanza. This is beautiful Vijay :)

Deb M

Date: 12/3/2023 12:48:00 PM

Absolutely beautiful Vijay!! Poetry at its best….Debx

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 12/3/2023 12:23:00 PM

A romantic flight whilst butterflies delight, your poems delight dear friend and butterflies are so apt when romance flies on their wings. Magnificent write, Be well, hugs and blessings, Jennifer.

Debjani Mitra

Date: 12/2/2023 5:00:00 AM

OMG! this is incredibly beautiful. I had wanted to write something similar, but missed the dead line... but all my thoughts so well crafted in this work of art ...a big applause dear friend . keep writing for all of us

Vijay Pandit
Date: 12/3/2023 6:35:00 AM

Glad you stopped by. Much appreciate your kind thoughts, Debjani. Many thanks.

Sam Kauffman

Date: 12/1/2023 7:51:00 PM

Vijay, this poem twinkles from an inner light of romantic delight. Each line "waltzes" in a "ballet love" and twirls through the stanzas like butterflies made of shimmering moonlight. Thank you for this joyful and mystical flight carried on moonbeams! Best wishes for the contest. Blessings!

Vijay Pandit
Date: 12/3/2023 6:34:00 AM

Thank you Sam. So special to hear that coming from you. Blessings, my friend.

Hiya Sharma

Date: 12/1/2023 7:08:00 AM

My gosh, this poem unveiled magical textures in the most enchanting, mesmerising and charismatic ways, which have woven a tapestry of fascinating fairytales upon my heart!!Just as the title, I can imagine butterflies dancing to the moon & swirling in your pristine wordsmithery. I have come to soup after a few weeks n today reading your words has inspired me as well."Enamored in tones ambrosial","In realms magical, scintillating thrones of Venus and Mars" Perfect choreography of poesy!! Love this

Vijay Pandit
Date: 12/1/2023 12:35:00 PM

So nice to read such wonderful remarks from a gifted writer! Your comments are always on mark, Hiya. Many thanks for your FAVE and your kind support.

Hiya Sharma
Date: 12/1/2023 7:10:00 AM

A fav for me, truly, in awe of this moon saga adorned with butterflies!

Christina Bowring

Date: 12/1/2023 4:34:00 AM

Gosh this is absolutely stunning dear Vijay - line after poetic line of exquisite beauty. So much to admire here but especially the imagery. ‘ twinkling revelry of luminous stars’ ‘ rowing aura of galactic stream’ . Gorgeous. So skilled, so well crafted. Even the title is sheer delight. In awe of this one. Good luck in the contest - with such talent on display here I’m sure it will be placed highly. Admiration, hugs and smiles to you xx

Vijay Pandit
Date: 12/1/2023 12:31:00 PM

Always a delight to read and enjoy your cheerful feedback, Christina. Much appreciate your visit and thoughtful insights. Many thanks. Just read your newest poem--splendid write. Admiration, hugs and smiles to you as well, my friend.

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 11/30/2023 5:53:00 PM

How lovely my friend. I hope this flutters all the way to the podium.

Vijay Pandit
Date: 12/1/2023 12:28:00 PM

Thank you my friend--so special to hear that from you, Richard. Much appreciate your visit and kind remarks.

Janice Canerdy

Date: 11/28/2023 6:04:00 AM

Another awesomely descriptive, skillfully written piece about the "marriage" of nature and romance, Vijay! Janice

Vijay Pandit
Date: 11/30/2023 6:12:00 AM

Glad you liked the poem, Janice. I always appreciate your presence on my page. Many thanks.

Bj Legros Kelley

Date: 11/26/2023 7:22:00 PM

So beautiful Vijay! It is an enchanting and magical gem of art, I love it!! <3

Vijay Pandit
Date: 11/27/2023 3:44:00 PM

Thank you BJ for your visit and kind feedback. Much appreciate.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/26/2023 2:32:00 PM

Wow it felt like a villanelle or something. Beautiful work, Vijay.

Vijay Pandit
Date: 11/26/2023 3:42:00 PM

Much appreciate, Andrea. Many thanks for your visit and kind remarks.

Joseph May

Date: 11/26/2023 10:49:00 AM

"Mystical melody of the moon" sets the tone for this enchanting write Vijay, best wishes

Vijay Pandit
Date: 11/26/2023 3:41:00 PM

Many thanks, Joseph--much appreciate.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 11/26/2023 6:11:00 AM

You make the butterflies' dance so romantic and it is. Thank you for sharing this descriptive and expressive one with us. Your visits to my page added a new dimension to my day. Sara K

Vijay Pandit
Date: 11/26/2023 3:41:00 PM

Thank you Sara. Much appreciate your visit and kind remarks.

Brandy Nicole

Date: 11/25/2023 8:06:00 PM

You know how to create a beautiful, breathtaking mood with your words. This is romantic, passionate and playful, all at the same time. The images you paint are graceful, yet magical and exciting. There's a sweet echo of love, under a "melodious moon." My heart is smiling. My best to you, Vijay. :) Hugs, Brandy

Vijay Pandit
Date: 11/26/2023 6:00:00 AM

I hear you my friend and see your smile. You are so very kind--much appreciate your presence on my page, Brandy. Many thanks for being there. Hugs to you as well.

Sotto Poet

Date: 11/25/2023 7:13:00 PM

Vijay, your poem captures the beauty of moonlit evenings as well as the sweet essence of love. Your words are rich in meaning and originality. Your artwork is stunning, conveying a sense of ethereal splendor. You truly have an excellent gift for writing and rhymes, as proved precisely in this writing.

Vijay Pandit
Date: 11/26/2023 5:58:00 AM

So special to read such glowing feedback from a talented writer. Much appreciate, as always, my friend. Many thanks, Lasaad.

Evelyn Judy Buehler

Date: 11/25/2023 4:46:00 PM

Your beautiful lines well convey the thrill of enchanted night and sweet romance, Vijay. Spellbinding images! :)

Vijay Pandit
Date: 11/26/2023 5:57:00 AM

Many thanks for your glowing feedback, my friend. Much appreciate, as always, Evelyn.

Clive Culverhouse

Date: 11/25/2023 4:13:00 PM

To be honest I could pick out any line but "When celestial orchestra plays, occult notes of galactic tune" is particularly good I thought, what a write, great expression Vijay

Vijay Pandit
Date: 11/26/2023 5:56:00 AM

Glad to see you on my page. Much appreciate, Clive--many thanks.

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 11/25/2023 4:06:00 PM

Outstanding and ethereal imagery, Vijay. You had my attention with the title and the first few lines. You seem to be a master of rhyme as well...your rhyme scheme here was perfect. Nicely done, Vijay! enjoy your evening, Sara

Vijay Pandit
Date: 11/26/2023 5:56:00 AM

So very kind of you, Sara. Much appreciate your heartfelt feedback. Many thanks.

Deb M

Date: 11/25/2023 10:18:00 AM

The Master of imagery strikes again!! Beautiful Vijay! Debx

Vijay Pandit
Date: 11/25/2023 11:46:00 AM

So very kind of you Deb. Much appreciate--many thanks, my friend.

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 11/25/2023 8:25:00 AM

Congratulations dear friend on your inclusion of your awesome poetry in Poetry Soups third Anthology - Reflections on the Important Things. Blessings, Jennifer.

Vijay Pandit
Date: 11/25/2023 11:45:00 AM

Many thanks Jennifer. Much appreciate, my friend.

Silent One

Date: 11/25/2023 8:16:00 AM

A lovely poem with great imagery, especially this stanza.. Enamored in tones ambrosial, humming riffs of moon song, Cherishing sweet promise of love, reverberating lifelong, Exalting fantasies of awe, emanating from ethereal heart, Edifying ecstasies of morrow, as shadows of bygones depart.. Best of luck in the contest..

Vijay Pandit
Date: 11/25/2023 11:44:00 AM

So nice to read that my friend-- from one who lives and breaths poetry. Many thanks for your kind remarks, SO.

Tom Cunningham

Date: 11/25/2023 7:58:00 AM

Stunning vocabulary Vijay along with superb imagery which is your trademark. Good luck in the contest. Tom

Vijay Pandit
Date: 11/25/2023 11:43:00 AM

Much appreciate Tom. Many thanks for taking the time while you recover from surgery. Sending your way goodwill wishes for a speedy recovery.

Ink Empress

Date: 11/25/2023 6:07:00 AM

Ah its so good to see you post again dear Vijay. I am mesmerised by the wordplay in this, both lyrical and celestial that truly is soul stirring. Magical ambience of love so beautifully and profoundly depicted here. I especially love the lines “ mystical lyrics of melodious moon;” “ Cherishing sweet promise of love,“ “ thrilling on wings of butterflies” “ Choreographing a ballet love,” mellifluous and magnificent flow of impeccable alliterations and diction. Definitely a fave. BOL in the contst

Vijay Pandit
Date: 11/25/2023 11:42:00 AM

You always inspire with every visit, my friend. So special to read your graceful comments, Ink, and to receive your FAVE. Much appreciate-- many thanks for your visit and your valued presence on my page.

Tom Woody

Date: 11/25/2023 6:04:00 AM

"as we embrace paradise of passion, desires ecstatic ignite." That's pretty hot Veej. And all under a butterfly filled full moon. Sweet

Brandy Nicole
Date: 11/26/2023 7:09:00 AM

May they continue that joyful dance, under the magical moon.

Vijay Pandit
Date: 11/26/2023 6:03:00 AM

A dance of joy that is--they are enamored in beauty of the moon!

Brandy Nicole
Date: 11/25/2023 7:52:00 PM

"Curving, swirling, butterflies merrily dance." That's pretty hot, as well.

Vijay Pandit
Date: 11/25/2023 11:38:00 AM

I always bend to the theme, my friend, especially when speaking to romance. Many thanks Tom--much appreciate your visit and comments.