When Birds Sing Sweetly,

When birds sing sweetly , 


bright notes fall on deaf ears.

My sightless sockets
no longer watch the setting sun descend 
in orange splendour
behind purple hills.
My fleshless limbs reach, suspended 
in un-returned embrace,
and hope sleeps in earth’s damp bed.

I once walked in your place, above,
treading soft amongst the stones,
my mind fixed firmly on the stars;
warm wind stroked my face,
framed by a pale blue sky.

I gave no thought to those below;
long chains of lives laid out in rows.
I brushed aside insistent whispers,
growing louder year on year;
Time’s breath at my back,
closing in an ever-shortening shadow.

I am so close I could call out to you-
stretch up to grasp your ankles as you pass;
but my soundless cries are impotent 
as dust on stone
scattered by the merest breath of air;
all thoughts dissolved
in earth, 
and flesh to grass.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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Agustin Avatar
May 31, 2025 at 10:49 PM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
Merryman Avatar
July 25, 2021 at 8:29 AM
Powerful imagery in this excellent write! Going in my favs! Virginia, this is so well written! Blessings, Kim M
Betts Avatar
September 9, 2021 at 11:05 AM
Thank You so much! I'm busy learning how to negotiate this site, but I have a very active website now!
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