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When Anguish Wails

hidden anguish wails

  dangling on throats of cold love...

    numb midnight    vacant




Senryu On Sadness Contest
Written 9/2/2017
Checked via howmanysyllables.com

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Judy Konos

October 29, 2017 at 3:59 PM

Well as Oprah says, "That's a WOW WOW!" Get in my 'One Footle Only' contest. Cheers!

Jannie Breedt

September 20, 2017 at 1:12 PM

I must admit that Im not filiar with senryu but having said , your description of anguish.is so real. I felt a lump in my throat and could imagine the nightime sadness.

Jannie Breedt

September 20, 2017 at 1:13 PM

Familiar

Heidi Sands

September 3, 2017 at 12:00 PM

Congratulations Nette :)

Anne-Lise Andresen

September 3, 2017 at 11:57 AM

- I'm back, Nette - Congratulations on your great second place in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Joanna Daniel

September 2, 2017 at 9:12 AM

Anguishful write, Nette:)

Paul Callus

September 2, 2017 at 6:50 AM

Cold love leaves an emptiness and sadness that is hard to describe, Nette. You succeeded to do so extremely well. Hugs // paul

Russell Sivey

September 2, 2017 at 5:11 AM

WOW, Wow, wow Nette, you have written a masterpiece here...I really love it! a Fave! I have 2 hrs that I have been given to use a computer a day, so I'm using it to go on the Soup this weekend, however, starting on Monday I have to go back to school and I'll have to have Emma get on to read and write for me, she is so special! I really enjoyed reading this wondrous poem this morning! You have delighted me by this incredibly sad piece! What a grandiose poem! Great Work my friend!!