William Kelii Kekaula Poet Free verse

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Colbert says to Eminem

When and Then

It is when we traverse our waning years,
with some embellishing enhancements,
or any medical type of any intervention,
then realize there is no justice to aging.


2020 January 14
WHEN and THEN Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Jenish Somadas

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Andrea Dietrich January 23, 2020 at 8:21 PM so very very true, William. I really relate to this one. William Kelii Kekaula January 23, 2020 at 9:56 PM Thanks, Andrea!~@wk

Anne-Lise Andresen January 23, 2020 at 1:12 PM - A pleasure to read your great contribution, William - Congratulations :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) William Kelii Kekaula January 23, 2020 at 2:59 PM Thank you, Anne-Lise, for taking the time~@wk

Michael Craig January 23, 2020 at 10:37 AM So very true. Great way to put it down in a poem. - William William Kelii Kekaula January 23, 2020 at 11:16 AM Thanks for your time Michael~@wk

Jenish Somadas January 23, 2020 at 6:36 AM Justice or no justice, we all will fight against aging.. lol.. Great thought.. Congrats on your HM and thank you for participating in this contest... William Kelii Kekaula January 23, 2020 at 11:18 AM Thank you so very much Jenish!~@wk

Caren Krutsinger January 14, 2020 at 11:42 AM there is "no justice to aging" for sure! William Kelii Kekaula January 14, 2020 at 12:46 PM True indeed Caren~@wk