When and Then

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Colbert says to Eminem

It is when we traverse our waning years, with some embellishing enhancements, or any medical type of any intervention, then realize there is no justice to aging. 2020 January 14 WHEN and THEN Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Jenish Somadas

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/23/2020 8:21:00 PM

so very very true, William. I really relate to this one.

Hilo Poet
Date: 1/23/2020 9:56:00 PM

Thanks, Andrea!~@wk

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 1/23/2020 1:12:00 PM

- A pleasure to read your great contribution, William - Congratulations :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Hilo Poet
Date: 1/23/2020 2:59:00 PM

Thank you, Anne-Lise, for taking the time~@wk

Michael Craig

Date: 1/23/2020 10:37:00 AM

So very true. Great way to put it down in a poem. - William

Hilo Poet
Date: 1/23/2020 11:16:00 AM

Thanks for your time Michael~@wk

Jenish Somadas

Date: 1/23/2020 6:36:00 AM

Justice or no justice, we all will fight against aging.. lol.. Great thought.. Congrats on your HM and thank you for participating in this contest...

Hilo Poet
Date: 1/23/2020 11:18:00 AM

Thank you so very much Jenish!~@wk

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 1/14/2020 11:42:00 AM

there is "no justice to aging" for sure!

Hilo Poet
Date: 1/14/2020 12:46:00 PM

True indeed Caren~@wk