When All Was Dark

WHEN ALL WAS DARK
Sewing machine, long idle, gathered dust In the antique I kept it for years to remind How my mother used it in our times at their worst, Stitched with love the family’s dress of all kind To save money whose source had almost dried. Beneath dust lingered the touch of her tired fingers She left, to wipe that out I never wished nor tried. Toiling hard to remake the displaced home, to her The war years seemed like only yesterday When the country was partitioned on dubious pretext. Uprooted and unwanted we were made to stray, Mother gave a safe mooring to the generation next. When she fell sick one winter in her twilight years I prayed, lighted a candle at deity’s altar for her sake, Time didn’t wait for her, I saw with eyes full of tears The candle sputtered, spent, and all was dark.
April 22, 2018.
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Johnson Avatar
May 2, 2018 at 3:50 PM
You found yet another way to write this using unconnected lines. Great job. Congratulations.
Sinha-Roy Avatar
May 3, 2018 at 1:19 AM
Thank you, Joyce for taking time to visit and for your nice comments.
Allison Avatar
May 2, 2018 at 3:37 PM
Great imagery Subimal, Many congratulations on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
Sinha-Roy Avatar
May 3, 2018 at 1:18 AM
Thank you, Jan.
Gentry Avatar
May 2, 2018 at 12:28 PM
Oh wow. Congratulations on your placement with this interesting poem. Enjoyed.
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May 3, 2018 at 1:18 AM
Thank you, Susan.
Gauthier Avatar
May 2, 2018 at 7:23 AM
I particularly love your final stanza, Subimal. Congrats.
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May 3, 2018 at 1:17 AM
Thank you, Line.
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