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When All Was Dark

WHEN ALL WAS DARK
Sewing machine, long idle, gathered dust In the antique I kept it for years to remind How my mother used it in our times at their worst, Stitched with love the family’s dress of all kind To save money whose source had almost dried. Beneath dust lingered the touch of her tired fingers She left, to wipe that out I never wished nor tried. Toiling hard to remake the displaced home, to her The war years seemed like only yesterday When the country was partitioned on dubious pretext. Uprooted and unwanted we were made to stray, Mother gave a safe mooring to the generation next. When she fell sick one winter in her twilight years I prayed, lighted a candle at deity’s altar for her sake, Time didn’t wait for her, I saw with eyes full of tears The candle sputtered, spent, and all was dark.
April 22, 2018.

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Date: 5/2/2018 3:50:00 PM
You found yet another way to write this using unconnected lines. Great job. Congratulations.
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Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 5/3/2018 1:19:00 AM
Thank you, Joyce for taking time to visit and for your nice comments.
Date: 5/2/2018 3:37:00 PM
Great imagery Subimal, Many congratulations on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 5/3/2018 1:18:00 AM
Thank you, Jan.
Date: 5/2/2018 12:28:00 PM
Oh wow. Congratulations on your placement with this interesting poem. Enjoyed.
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Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 5/3/2018 1:18:00 AM
Thank you, Susan.
Date: 5/2/2018 7:23:00 AM
I particularly love your final stanza, Subimal. Congrats.
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Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 5/3/2018 1:17:00 AM
Thank you, Line.

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