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When All the Humans Are Gone

One day, When books turn to dust Aliens will wonder What happened to us Our computers will look Like oversized paperweights With no way to access The knowledge encased Especially the poets On poetrysoup They would miss out On this literary troupe Of like-minded poets Who write from their souls Pouring their hearts and emotions Into their bowls No soup for the aliens They will have to make do With wondering why Our world is in ruins Get Well P.D.!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 3/15/2012 3:33:00 PM
Congrats on your win..Way to go..Sara
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Date: 3/13/2012 10:10:00 PM
Congrats Susan on your win today..
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Date: 3/13/2012 6:03:00 PM
A much different take on the contest and well done. Congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce
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Date: 3/13/2012 3:45:00 PM
congrats Susan on a super win for a souper write on PS site luv.. wonderful words tell it all luv..
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Date: 3/13/2012 6:04:00 AM
Congratulations for your win in P.D.'s get well soup contest Susan. Love, Carol
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Date: 3/13/2012 2:43:00 AM
Hi and congratulations Susan, nice one xx
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Date: 3/12/2012 11:23:00 PM
SUSAN., , Congratulations! with your wonderful soup poem. I'm feeling much better now. LOL... except the folks around me. I got Nate and my granddaughter sick. SHAME ON ME! THANK YOU FOR SUPPORTING my contest ;-) I much enjoyed your entry, ~ always*PD
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Date: 8/12/2011 8:20:00 PM
A very good entry it was too. Congrats on your win my friend. God Bless, JB
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Date: 8/6/2011 10:28:00 PM
Re-reading this one. It's really cool. I had sent you soupmails yesterday and can't recall that you answered them, just in case you didn't know. HOpe you are enjoying the weekend. I finally got on here and now I'm going off. Luv, Andrea
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Date: 7/25/2011 4:05:00 PM
LOL, Many congrats on all your wins, Susan : )
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Date: 7/25/2011 9:08:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved win in Natalie's "Talkin' Tech" contest Susan. Love, Carol
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Date: 7/25/2011 3:43:00 AM
hey Susan, congrats on a great win, David
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Date: 7/24/2011 8:26:00 PM
Congrats Susan on another awesome win with this unique poetry luv.. enjoy another sweet success with luv..
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Date: 7/24/2011 5:50:00 PM
My congratulations on this win in the contest of natalie,susan
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Date: 7/24/2011 5:42:00 PM
Susan-Congrats. on your win in my contest! I thought this one was very cute and witty :) Great job!
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Date: 7/22/2011 12:08:00 PM
I love this, Susan. it is one of those poems just for US, the poets of Soup. We can really appreciate it. Frogley may have known I adored him. But it's one of those things you just never know. I think he enjoyed making me miserable ever since I may have pissed him off by taking John at the youth camp. IF you read my BIO/narrative I did about my first love(somewhere on my current page of poetry) you will see the story of john and Chris is the boy mentioned at the beginning of that narrative.
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Date: 7/22/2011 7:44:00 AM
Happy weekend and thank you for sharing your wonderful poetry with us once again Susan. I am going to try and write some entries for the contests this weekend also. It is still so hot and humid here but we might get some relief next week. Wishing you a weekend filled with joy and inspiration. Love, Carol
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Date: 7/21/2011 3:26:00 PM
There is some fine humor here, Susan, but the serious message packs a punch. I fear one day aliens will indeed wonder why we destroyed our planet. Excellent poem! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 7/21/2011 3:16:00 PM
Wow! You really got me thinking pal! I'm so glad I came across this thought provoking intelligent write. Love the way you addresed this poem. Wonderful work!
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Date: 7/21/2011 3:11:00 PM
We just had a discussion about this topic this afternoon..Enjoyed reading your thoughts about it..Sara
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