When a Woman Is Just a Woman

When a woman is just a woman,
     she looks beyond the surface of
                                                 what is.
She understands the foibles of her man,
             knowing from time to time
he’ll make mistakes,
          and even though she wishes
         he could have inside his chest
a heart as tender as her own,
         she understands that men 
                         are somehow different.      
They do not often see things as she does,
                                          but that’s all right.

When a woman is just a woman, she forgives.
But sometimes, lacking courage,
                       she lets her heart be ruined,
forgiving more than even God 
                                 expects her to forgive.
  Other times, a woman isn’t the woman at all
                        God would have her be.
She scolds, demands, and lets her heart grow cold 
  in spite of everything her man may do
             to fulfill her needs.
Such a woman can never be completely satisfied.
                        

However, when a woman is just a woman -
      when she lets her loving heart
         guide her thoughts and actions 
in equal measure         with her lovely mind,
          she does not let herself be governed
                                                    by mere whim.
Rationality and compromise are among her bywords.
                Also, she knows how much to take
                                             before she calls it quits.
But always and foremost,
                    She is merciful and fair.
And never is she  too proud
                             to want for more 
than  a man          
                     who is just a man.


For Skat's Any Old Poem #9 (poem never placed in a past contest)Poetry Contest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Guzzi Avatar
July 16, 2015 at 2:58 PM
Perhaps you have defined a whole human being and not half of the human race? Light & Love
Dietrich Avatar
July 16, 2015 at 4:13 PM
yes, at the very end, I got in man!!!
Merryman Avatar
July 13, 2015 at 6:19 PM
Well said, Andrea! Congrats on your win! Love, Kim
Harding Avatar
July 13, 2015 at 4:09 PM
I love this, Andrea. So real, so forgiving. Congrats on your win! xoxo
Allison Avatar
July 13, 2015 at 2:48 PM
wise words indeed Andrea congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
A  Avatar
July 13, 2015 at 12:16 AM
Andrea, thank you for the support... SKAT
Walker Avatar
June 17, 2015 at 9:39 PM
Great write, wonderfully written, love the first and last lines.
Gasun Avatar
June 17, 2015 at 10:05 AM
So glad to read this amazing piece tribute to us, women my dear friend, Andrea. A fave. Thank you so much! God bless! love lots and biggest hug, Leonora
Horne Avatar
June 16, 2015 at 10:13 AM
insightful write here, my friend - hope this will be a big winner
Hay Avatar
June 15, 2015 at 10:23 AM
I can totally relate to this, love this one, gonna add to my favs, Kind Rgds, Laura
Poet Avatar
June 14, 2015 at 1:49 PM
Love it Andrea!Beautifully written.
Dom Avatar
June 13, 2015 at 11:17 PM
In the heart of what matters. We feel. She and he. Nice write Andrea :-)
Lamoureux Avatar
June 13, 2015 at 6:13 PM
A lot to contemplate with this one. I think men feel as deeply as women but are socialized to keep it inside. I recommend poetry as an outlet for any man, providing he is man enough to be vulnerable! Poetry is not for the weak of heart or mind.
Johnson Avatar
June 12, 2015 at 10:12 PM
Humanity between the sexes sometimes perplexes. And we're left to accept how it vexes. Peace. :)
Dom Avatar
June 13, 2015 at 11:15 PM
Agreed Robert Johnson. If we agree that sexes are different but equal, we should also agree to disagree on the sequel.
Carroll Avatar
June 11, 2015 at 11:33 PM
Well crafted and evocative write Andre..
Pinet Avatar
June 11, 2015 at 5:44 PM
This is a well penned poem that not only describes a state of mind , but instills such thoughts within the reader's mind through great imagery and triggered emotions. Emile. #7
Muideen Avatar
June 11, 2015 at 4:33 PM
What an excellent write Andrea, your write is extremely true and beautiful penned........A.M.
Hamilton Avatar
June 11, 2015 at 3:19 PM
you totally nailed it Andrea superb pen one of your very best hugs 7 + fav
Brown Avatar
June 11, 2015 at 2:51 PM
"Also, she knows how much to take before she calls it quits". What a powerful line. But the best in my opinion, is 'merciful and fair'. Loved the entire piece.
Sirak Avatar
June 11, 2015 at 12:42 PM
You had me hooked with the first two lines, and it only got better from there. You definitely dove below the surface and unearthed some truths with this one.
Austin Avatar
June 11, 2015 at 11:23 AM
I like this woman of yours and she is seldom seen in Hollywood's Latest. I may be old fashioned, but I like a woman who is SWEET and LOVING, and not trying to be the boss. Hey! It's fifty-fifty so far as I am concerned. Love, daaver
May Avatar
June 11, 2015 at 5:57 AM
You explored many facets of a woman in this very well written piece Andrea...A strong yet tender write...hugs
Sathasivam Avatar
June 11, 2015 at 1:52 AM
Excellent. Thoughtfully penned. All the best for contest. Enjoyed reading it. Tfs
Marcum Wong Avatar
June 11, 2015 at 12:54 AM
Both sexes are fallible because we are human. Keeping our expectations in line with being aware of this fact helps keep the peace. I enjoyed the message you so eloquently created with your usual inimitable style Andrea. It should do really well. You ended it perfectly too!
Anish Avatar
June 10, 2015 at 11:17 PM
This is an interesting take on a woman's point of view. Half the world..... Peace & love Matthew Anish
Laurie Avatar
June 10, 2015 at 10:44 PM
Do you know what Andrea, I think you've made everybody happy with your poem. You've set it up nicely - good luck - Lindsay
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