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When a Woman Is Just a Woman

When a woman is just a woman, she looks beyond the surface of what is. She understands the foibles of her man, knowing from time to time he’ll make mistakes, and even though she wishes he could have inside his chest a heart as tender as her own, she understands that men are somehow different. They do not often see things as she does, but that’s all right. When a woman is just a woman, she forgives. But sometimes, lacking courage, she lets her heart be ruined, forgiving more than even God expects her to forgive. Other times, a woman isn’t the woman at all God would have her be. She scolds, demands, and lets her heart grow cold in spite of everything her man may do to fulfill her needs. Such a woman can never be completely satisfied. However, when a woman is just a woman - when she lets her loving heart guide her thoughts and actions in equal measure with her lovely mind, she does not let herself be governed by mere whim. Rationality and compromise are among her bywords. Also, she knows how much to take before she calls it quits. But always and foremost, She is merciful and fair. And never is she too proud to want for more than a man who is just a man. For Skat's Any Old Poem #9 (poem never placed in a past contest)Poetry Contest

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Date: 7/16/2015 2:58:00 PM
Perhaps you have defined a whole human being and not half of the human race? Light & Love
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 7/16/2015 4:13:00 PM
yes, at the very end, I got in man!!!
Date: 7/13/2015 6:19:00 PM
Well said, Andrea! Congrats on your win! Love, Kim
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Date: 7/13/2015 4:09:00 PM
I love this, Andrea. So real, so forgiving. Congrats on your win! xoxo
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Date: 7/13/2015 2:48:00 PM
wise words indeed Andrea congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 7/13/2015 12:16:00 AM
Andrea, thank you for the support... SKAT
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Date: 6/17/2015 9:39:00 PM
Great write, wonderfully written, love the first and last lines.
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Date: 6/17/2015 10:05:00 AM
So glad to read this amazing piece tribute to us, women my dear friend, Andrea. A fave. Thank you so much! God bless! love lots and biggest hug, Leonora
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Date: 6/16/2015 10:13:00 AM
insightful write here, my friend - hope this will be a big winner
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Date: 6/15/2015 10:23:00 AM
I can totally relate to this, love this one, gonna add to my favs, Kind Rgds, Laura
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Date: 6/14/2015 1:49:00 PM
Love it Andrea!Beautifully written.
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Date: 6/13/2015 11:17:00 PM
In the heart of what matters. We feel. She and he. Nice write Andrea :-)
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Date: 6/13/2015 6:13:00 PM
A lot to contemplate with this one. I think men feel as deeply as women but are socialized to keep it inside. I recommend poetry as an outlet for any man, providing he is man enough to be vulnerable! Poetry is not for the weak of heart or mind.
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Date: 6/12/2015 10:12:00 PM
Humanity between the sexes sometimes perplexes. And we're left to accept how it vexes. Peace. :)
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Michael Dom
Date: 6/13/2015 11:15:00 PM
Agreed Robert Johnson. If we agree that sexes are different but equal, we should also agree to disagree on the sequel.
Date: 6/11/2015 11:33:00 PM
Well crafted and evocative write Andre..
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Date: 6/11/2015 5:44:00 PM
This is a well penned poem that not only describes a state of mind , but instills such thoughts within the reader's mind through great imagery and triggered emotions. Emile. #7
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Date: 6/11/2015 4:33:00 PM
What an excellent write Andrea, your write is extremely true and beautiful penned........A.M.
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Date: 6/11/2015 3:19:00 PM
you totally nailed it Andrea superb pen one of your very best hugs 7 + fav
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Date: 6/11/2015 2:51:00 PM
"Also, she knows how much to take before she calls it quits". What a powerful line. But the best in my opinion, is 'merciful and fair'. Loved the entire piece.
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Date: 6/11/2015 12:42:00 PM
You had me hooked with the first two lines, and it only got better from there. You definitely dove below the surface and unearthed some truths with this one.
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Date: 6/11/2015 11:23:00 AM
I like this woman of yours and she is seldom seen in Hollywood's Latest. I may be old fashioned, but I like a woman who is SWEET and LOVING, and not trying to be the boss. Hey! It's fifty-fifty so far as I am concerned. Love, daaver
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Date: 6/11/2015 5:57:00 AM
You explored many facets of a woman in this very well written piece Andrea...A strong yet tender write...hugs
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Date: 6/11/2015 1:52:00 AM
Excellent. Thoughtfully penned. All the best for contest. Enjoyed reading it. Tfs
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Date: 6/11/2015 12:54:00 AM
Both sexes are fallible because we are human. Keeping our expectations in line with being aware of this fact helps keep the peace. I enjoyed the message you so eloquently created with your usual inimitable style Andrea. It should do really well. You ended it perfectly too!
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Date: 6/10/2015 11:17:00 PM
This is an interesting take on a woman's point of view. Half the world..... Peace & love Matthew Anish
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Date: 6/10/2015 10:44:00 PM
Do you know what Andrea, I think you've made everybody happy with your poem. You've set it up nicely - good luck - Lindsay
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