When a Poet Lose His Words

In your eyes my dear blue oceans ravels and in your hair night get lost 
Between your lips a poet lose his words and vanquish his thoughts
A circulation of a full moon I see in your face and a breeze from God heavens come out from your breaths
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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J.T. Avatar
August 21, 2017 at 11:05 PM
very emotional poem; well done -JT
Shahein Avatar
September 7, 2017 at 8:03 AM
Thank you so much my dear /hugs :)
Sage Avatar
April 16, 2017 at 4:33 PM
This is great! actually well worded romanticism, been a bit long I came around here...and it's wonderful that the first poem am reading is this...it's so lovely, an excellent one, best wishes Dalia
Shahein Avatar
April 17, 2017 at 2:27 AM
well you know me i'm addicted to romance ....lol...thank u very much for your sweet words and your lovely visit / :)
Deo Avatar
April 15, 2017 at 2:18 PM
So, this is great love poetry, which I have NOT written for a long time. Except Puppy Love for the contest, and I was among the second place finishes with Eve Roper's contest. Do submit to any of Eve Roper's ... they are FREE to enter. U can click & simply add existing poem one contest at a time. Or write a fresh entry. Take care
Shahein Avatar
April 15, 2017 at 2:26 PM
Thank you very much my dear , I will and once again i appreciate your lovely comment and your lovely visit to my poems , hugs / / :) T.C
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