Elton Camp Poet Rhyme

When a Poem Is Criticized

When a Poem Is Criticized

By Elton Camp

As for all those who will post poetry online
Severe criticism is a thing they can’t mind
We must be prepared for some expert to tell,
“Nice try, but your poem didn’t flow so well.”

Or, “Your writing was really a disgusting sight.
Because the rhymes you selected are just trite.”
Then along will come some inane, carping slob
“Keep writing, but don’t give up your day job.”

Usually, if the critic’s own posting you check
You will find he also didn’t do worth a heck
Much like a eunuch in a harem or a musician deaf,
He tells others what to do, but can’t do it himself

(Revised 2-1-11 in keeping with suggestions.)

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Joe Inka February 1, 2011 at 3:59 PM I like this poem alot. There is little point in pandering to the"experts" Unless you need good reviews to make a living. If you write from your own heart and mind, your work will speak to those it is meant to speak to. Write to share what you are, Poetry would be soooo boring if everyone's idea of"good poetry" was learned from a book. Sorry I'll shut up now

Joe Flach February 1, 2011 at 10:00 AM It is much easier to critique than it is to create // Advise is so easily given but hard to take // But if I only listen when praise is received // It is me myself, who is deceived. I like your poem and the thought behind it. Joe

Francine Roberts February 1, 2011 at 9:19 AM good one...but .....no just kidding there was no but