When a Lone Crow Cawed



Recently,one winter morning,out of the blue,
I heard  the caw of a lone crow -
Once found in  flocks  across  our land,
Now vanished many years ago.
Its caw  awakened in me the 
Memories buried in the wavering wash of time.

The weather those days was fine,
Water in the ponds and rivers was pure.
Rills full of fish would twist and  flow
Through the villages.

The cricket’s song at dawn and dusk,
The farmer's call in the early morning,
As he headed towards the paddy field
With a pair of bulls so charming.

His caw recalled the temple bell’s ring
From the palace shrine in early morning,
A sound that once brough heart’s delight.

Oh,the Uthum’s song on a sunny day,
And Tamna’s call at night,  
No longer heard,nor seen the fireflies,
Twinkling far and near at night.

Gone are many local varieties of fish,
Plants,and greens once found in abundance
In our land.

Today, that lone caw in the air  
Brought back to me the memories rare,
Yet worried for what we have lost,
Ecological balance now the cost.
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Date: 7/25/2025 11:28:00 AM
Funny how a sight, sound, or smell can trigger memories. Memories which you've brought forth in beautiful detail.
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Akham Nilabirdhwaja Singh
Date: 7/28/2025 8:52:00 PM
Thank you.
Date: 6/10/2025 6:10:00 AM
OH, you transported me to sights, sounds, motions and rhythms of life that, apparently, live in your heart. Such memories are sweet and sad melancholy at times, too. I loved seeing your childhood home in this remarkable write. It is real, yes, not fiction? Often it is hard to tell but THIS felt real, so it was, or you are a convincing writer! CayCay
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Akham Nilabirdhwaja Singh
Date: 7/28/2025 8:52:00 PM
Thank you
Date: 5/30/2025 8:54:00 AM
Congrats on your win, Nicely done
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Akham Nilabirdhwaja Singh
Date: 6/1/2025 3:25:00 AM
Thank you
Date: 5/29/2025 1:58:00 PM
Memories are grand and grim in the present tense. Lovely writing, as always real and true!
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Akham Nilabirdhwaja Singh
Date: 5/29/2025 10:28:00 PM
Thank you
Date: 5/28/2025 2:37:00 AM
- I'm so sure I wrote a comment on this poem ... (? ... ) - Many animal species on Earth will become extinct due to man-made climate change ... this threatens everything in nature - We still have crows ... but not in large flocks :) - An important message in your poem, Akham - hugs
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Akham Nilabirdhwaja Singh
Date: 5/29/2025 2:13:00 AM
I have written a poem on the crow and two poems mentioning it.It is a symbol of our agrarian past,which I hold dearly.Thanks for your beautiful comment.
Date: 5/24/2025 10:53:00 PM
Environment so much changed and degraded which made many species of fish,birds,creatures plants disappear from this land.We all need conscious of this.
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