When a Lone Crow Cawed



Recently,one winter morning,out of the blue,
I heard  the caw of a lone crow -
Once found in  flocks  across  our land,
Now vanished many years ago.
Its caw  awakened in me the 
Memories buried in the wavering wash of time.

The weather those days was fine,
Water in the ponds and rivers was pure.
Rills full of fish would twist and  flow
Through the villages.

The cricket’s song at dawn and dusk,
The farmer's call in the early morning,
As he headed towards the paddy field
With a pair of bulls so charming.

His caw recalled the temple bell’s ring
From the palace shrine in early morning,
A sound that once brough heart’s delight.

Oh,the Uthum’s song on a sunny day,
And Tamna’s call at night,  
No longer heard,nor seen the fireflies,
Twinkling far and near at night.

Gone are many local varieties of fish,
Plants,and greens once found in abundance
In our land.

Today, that lone caw in the air  
Brought back to me the memories rare,
Yet worried for what we have lost,
Ecological balance now the cost.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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Dietrich Avatar
November 8, 2025 at 10:21 AM
Stunning nostalgia here. A fave
Crandall Avatar
July 25, 2025 at 11:28 AM
Funny how a sight, sound, or smell can trigger memories. Memories which you've brought forth in beautiful detail.
Singh Avatar
July 28, 2025 at 8:52 PM
Thank you.
Godwin Avatar
June 10, 2025 at 6:10 AM
OH, you transported me to sights, sounds, motions and rhythms of life that, apparently, live in your heart. Such memories are sweet and sad melancholy at times, too. I loved seeing your childhood home in this remarkable write. It is real, yes, not fiction? Often it is hard to tell but THIS felt real, so it was, or you are a convincing writer! CayCay
Singh Avatar
July 28, 2025 at 8:52 PM
Thank you
May Avatar
May 30, 2025 at 8:54 AM
Congrats on your win, Nicely done
Singh Avatar
June 1, 2025 at 3:25 AM
Thank you
Rodrigues Avatar
May 29, 2025 at 1:58 PM
Memories are grand and grim in the present tense. Lovely writing, as always real and true!
Singh Avatar
May 29, 2025 at 10:28 PM
Thank you
Andresen Avatar
May 28, 2025 at 2:37 AM
- I'm so sure I wrote a comment on this poem ... (? ... ) - Many animal species on Earth will become extinct due to man-made climate change ... this threatens everything in nature - We still have crows ... but not in large flocks :) - An important message in your poem, Akham - hugs
Singh Avatar
May 29, 2025 at 2:13 AM
I have written a poem on the crow and two poems mentioning it.It is a symbol of our agrarian past,which I hold dearly.Thanks for your beautiful comment.
Buhagiar Avatar
May 25, 2025 at 7:15 AM
Crows have a reputation of ill-will. A deep poem.
Singh Avatar
May 25, 2025 at 10:09 PM
Thank you
Devi Avatar
May 24, 2025 at 10:53 PM
Environment so much changed and degraded which made many species of fish,birds,creatures plants disappear from this land.We all need conscious of this.
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