When a Dream Remains a Dream

When a dream remains a dream
it’s like I dived into 
the depths of the sea,
onto the corals down there 
to engrave my name
but the bottom was too deep 
and my breath too short
and I got bogged up
on the surface.

When a dream remains a dream
it’s like it drizzled 
a scent of rain
but the cloud was soon 
scattered away
- what a time for the weather 
to get fine again! – 
and I only drank 
a spell of drought!

When a dream remains a dream
it’s like a shore of stars 
I endeavoured to colour 
in the hues of joy
but the night, that wild eagle  
dashed upon me
and I was left with
the shards of 
a fractured look.

I remember, though, a dream
I climbed upon only
to find trodden mud
and a hope withering 
flake by flake.

Oh, when a dream 
remains a dream
it’s like a poem of mine
that I had kept 
in the drawers of time,
but it got caught
into the venomous hooks
of fake needs 
and got lost
		or so I think.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Dietrich Avatar
August 8, 2014 at 7:40 PM
Very interesting one revealing some deep thoughts. I hope none of your poems will get lost. They sustain us, all those poems we write!! I would hate to lose mine.
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