Courtney Vinch Poet Ode

When

"When"


“When”
 
When we dream
 And when we love 
Is there anything
 Above
 When we begin
 In our dreams
 In our past
 We can try and make this last
 Change is one way of bravery
 But
 Deep inside theirs a child
 Still afraid
 Learning to crawl
 Take down the walls 
Be proud.

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Peter Kiggin April 15, 2014 at 4:56 AM We think we can control ourselves but we are just like the past and the future unboundless

Richard Rosen April 9, 2014 at 3:43 PM Courtney, There is not only an inner child deep inside, this poem reveals an inner strength "Learning to crawl, Take down the walls, Be Proud." Another poem ending in hope. Richard

Justin Bordner April 9, 2014 at 2:26 PM I like the desire of your dream. J.A.B.

Pace Ink-U-Script April 8, 2014 at 11:20 AM You speak from your heart...its in your work! :)