When

When life throws you stones 
You brake it down and make sand castles 
When the water comes to wash away
the clouds to make room for a rainbow 
When you walk leaving foot prints as time 
Passes buy you come to realize no one can
Step into your shoes 
When you think no one has been there
They have and done that just not in the 
Same order 
When you start to tare down the walls 
And the halls start to close you in to keep
You locked in a past so dark you can not 
See the door look for the light for its sight 
Will set you free 
When people start to change its time to brake 
Off the friend ship chain 
When family say they got your back 
But not standing behind you 
You tend to fall on your own 
When the one you love try so hard 
But just cant get it there is just no way of finding it 
When the string brakes the chain of thought is gone 
Have you asked your self when has any our anything 
Gone your way our pretended to stay 
Maybe at your out most worst day 
wouldn’t you might say 
When all is said and done at the end of the day 
Is in front of you here and now not when

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