Wheel

Symbol of mass transportation,
crucial as a pair of wings;
wonder where we'd be without it
in the broader scheme of things?

It's hard to say just how we'd cope,
or how we'd get around.
I must confess a nagging fear
we'd stay tied to the ground;

go no further than Cro-Magnons
dragging women by the hair,
as they forage in the jungle
lugging trophies to their lair!

Our trips would be restricted
to the tribe across the marsh;
we'd just better hope they're friendly,
not belligerent or harsh.

The prospects weren't too sanguine
that we'd subjugate the land
until the wheel's invention
guaranteed our upper hand.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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December 15, 2015 at 11:11 PM
Yes, Yes Bless, Bless... HUGS LINDA
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December 15, 2015 at 11:01 PM
Yup, the wheels keep turning, one of the best inventions possible. Keith, them Yabba-Dabba Do feet weren't gonna get us nowhere. enjoyed. LINDA
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December 15, 2015 at 11:06 PM
Nope... Thank God for whoever first thought of choppin' off the corners!!! Bless you LINDA! Best wishes, Keith
Rigoler Avatar
December 15, 2015 at 10:07 PM
Nicely written, Keith, but I'm not the wheel made us better humans or drivers! Best to you. /M
Bickerstaffe Avatar
December 15, 2015 at 10:10 PM
Thank you sir! Your sly commentary is much appreciated. Best wishes, Keith
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