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Whats the Point

Power Point Presentation on Meditation was underway Eyes, ears glued to central points, narrative was on Suddenly someone sneezed, concentration frittered away Missed the Point, presentor thought, yet went on Came in pointless sorry, presentation went ahead Breathing Techniques discussed, right postures shown Suddenly someone farted, all noses squeezed Pointless, presentor thought, yet went on Freshner sprayed, presentation commenced shortly Chakaras* highlighted, high points of each focussed on Suddenly someone yawned, rest yawned contagiously Beyond the Point, presentor thought, yet went on Tea break, visiting cards exchanged, presentation resumed Practicals ensued, all called on stage one by one Suddenly someone trying meditation snored, all bemused No Point, presentor thought, yet went on Meditation Presentation ended with understanding fair All liked, vowed to religiously include in routine all lesson Suddenly someone recalled he had `Amnesia'** during seminar What's the Point, presentor thought, wrapped up presentation ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------ (*) Chakaras -Eastern Tradition believes that Life force passes through seven primary CHAKRAS (points symbolised by BodyPart), each Chakra representing unique physical and psychic energy. (**)Amnesia - Partial or total loss of memory ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- 8th Place - Members Contest - What's the Point by Paula Swanson) -------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------

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Date: 1/21/2011 1:40:00 PM
enjoyed seeing this good placment Hitendra congratulations.
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Date: 1/21/2011 12:27:00 PM
Hi Hitendra - Congratulations on your WIN in Paula's contest. Best wishes, KC
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Date: 1/21/2011 12:00:00 PM
Congrats Hitendra on your wonderful win in Paula's contest with this extraordinary entry my friend... u sure made the point in your awesome lines... enjoy another top ten win with luv..
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Date: 1/21/2011 11:56:00 AM
Congrats, Hitendra. Nice going. Enjoyed. xxxRalph
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Date: 1/21/2011 10:37:00 AM
Congratulations on the well deserved win in the contest, Hitendra
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Date: 1/21/2011 10:18:00 AM
Hitendra, Congratulations on your win in Paula's "What's the Point?" Contest! Love, Annalise
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Date: 1/21/2011 9:38:00 AM
Congratulations on your win Hitendra in the "What's The Point" contest by Paula Swanson. Love, Carol
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Date: 10/16/2010 10:59:00 AM
@Catie - yeah... it depicts how casual attitude comes in way of concentration disturbing not only self but also others who are seriously inclined to learn. Thnx for Good Luck for contest. Luv/Bestwishes always..... Hitendra Mehta
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Date: 10/16/2010 7:56:00 AM
@ Rohini - Thnx for nice comments.....
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