What's That Smell

Suffering friends told Robert he oughta
take a shower every week--"you gotta."
But he said a month was fine
more often would waste his time.
Now Robert is persona non grata.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Laurie Avatar
May 10, 2016 at 2:18 AM
G'day Paul ... once a month whether he needs it or not seems fair enough although a hermit life is on the cards - Lindsay
Allison Avatar
April 26, 2016 at 5:17 PM
ha ha ha great one Paul - he should get together with the fella in my current limerick -sounds like a great match lol:-) hugs Jan xxx7
Schneiter Avatar
April 26, 2016 at 6:50 PM
Thank you, Jan. Your comments (dare I say it?) are always a breath of fresh air. I checked out your current limerick--it's hilarious (see my comment).
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