Home » Poems » Jaime Ferreyros » What's That Called?

What's That Called?

You know that feeling at the airport Watching passengers arrive As you’re about to board? Or at a restaurant Asking for the check As the guy at the other table is about To devour a 28 ounce Prime Aged Porterhouse steak? What about when you’re leaving the beach Sunburned & sizzling after many hours under the scorching sun Observing fresh incoming beachgoers unload their gear…or On the highway, Stuck in a bumper to bumper traffic While others drive briskly back home On the opposite lane… What’s that called?

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Joseph Spence Sr

Date: 10/13/2008 9:55:00 AM

This is an interesting poem. I like the flow of the words and the use of the rhetorical questioning technique at the end. Certainly this impacts the senses and in mixed in many ways with emotional outpouring. Great job! ~Joseph

Michael Jordan

Date: 9/26/2008 2:50:00 PM

Jamie - Very well done - much thought is provoked with this poem - God Bless

Sharon Winter

Date: 9/25/2008 1:24:00 PM

Um...normal life? Karma? Always loving the anticipation of things? Hating when good things end? Hating traffic? It's called a thought provoking write. It's quite like a riddle that I feel I haven't answered. Pretty cool. Though I am wondering if there really is a specific answer? Always a pleasure to read you Jaimie! Love, Shar xoxo