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Whats Our Want

What’s in a want, what makes it so big, 
What makes us all chase, race and raid?
And why, after devouring our want, do we create a new want, 
A want that is perfectly made.

What’s with the want, its allure, bait, appeal, 
Why does a want torment?
Aren’t we all satisfied with what we already have, 
Aren’t we, by now, all content?

Maybe our wants aren’t what we think they should be, 
Maybe they’re not made at all.
Maybe they’re grown from feelings of happy, 
From pride, desire or grief with no shawl.

I think our most intimate wants for attachment and love, 
For approval and inclusion and care.
These are the wants we urgently need, 
These should be the wants that we wear.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Godwin Avatar
October 11, 2016 at 3:11 PM
Ah, want vs. need - I enjoyed your dramatic write. It hurts me to see the lack of comments (just noticed), happens to me and others, but has no bearing on one's talent - I've learned that. There is a lot of emotion, drama and creativity in you, Lewis - please don't stop sharing your quite able abilities, please don't be discourage fight it, like I do ... CayCay
Raynes Avatar
October 11, 2016 at 6:37 PM
thanks caycay, yep, just gotta keep writing
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