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I can't seem to concentrate
My life is all a flutter
Can't figure out the cause
Unless it's too much butter.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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January 10, 2009 at 11:10 AM
Ran across this one again and had to chuckle. Thanks for the day brightener! Keep on writing! Karen
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September 4, 2008 at 7:57 AM
if it's cloged arteries and veins. it's the butter.jhl
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August 20, 2008 at 8:35 AM
Thanks for making me chuckle with this one. What an enjoyable read. Thank you for sharing it with us. Keep on writing. Karen
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August 18, 2008 at 8:22 PM
a very cute and funny piece, enjoyed it. thank you for reading my Rain at last and for your comment
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August 14, 2008 at 5:48 AM
This is so great, Cile. I definitely know the feeling, and I think for me it's too much coffee. That's my story and I'm sticking to it. Thanks for sharing this! love.t
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August 12, 2008 at 11:46 AM
LOL! It's so goood to have you back. You keep me light hearted and laughing, good for the soul. Sending good thoughts your way hun. To cute smile! Love Light Truth Patricia
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August 9, 2008 at 2:31 PM
Made me smile. How are you doing? Made me think of a nursery rhyme I always read to my daughter. Wash it down with a beer. Love Heidie
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August 8, 2008 at 12:51 PM
WHAT!! Too much butter! Never. Good to see you writing again. Vince. I was thinking of you and Billy when I wrote cowboys don't cry. God Bless. Vince
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August 6, 2008 at 4:37 PM
Well, if it's too much butter for you, it must be too much chocolate for me. Hey, we have to blame it on something! LOL! Cile, this is so cute! Love, Shar
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August 6, 2008 at 4:31 PM
Cile - how are you my special Mother - I don't mean to nag so much but you had better watch the butter - Hey I went to go mail you that package today but my car wouldn't run some body left the lights on -oh yea I done that - when Toni gets home I'll jump it and tomorrow I'll get those in the mail - love you Cile and God Bless
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