What's Bliss

The sun is setting and it paints 
the sky a hearty scarlet,
Imagine yourself walking 
barefoot along the beach and the
wet sand squishing between your toes,
Close your eyes and listen 
to the waves lapping the shore, 
Take a deep breath of salty air 
and let go of your cares--Ha, this is Bliss!



10 or less lines contest by rob carmack
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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October 16, 2015 at 9:39 PM
Abdul, Congratulations on your win. -SKAT-
Dietrich Avatar
October 16, 2015 at 7:59 PM
Love it! Congrats for your win.
Inman Avatar
October 15, 2015 at 9:47 AM
Abdul, I'm right there in my dreams. Live in Florida, haven't been the beach in two years.
A. Sharma Avatar
October 15, 2015 at 2:16 AM
Congrats on superb win abdul with this wonderful write!
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October 14, 2015 at 9:40 PM
Abdul, congratulations on your winning write:-) Alexis
Lindley Avatar
October 14, 2015 at 8:44 PM
Congrats on your win withthis superb poem my friend! A7
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