What's a Good Man

A good man protect his woman from the cold world
Make love to her soul like a river flowing to the heavens
A good man simulate his lady mind 
A good man dig deep inside her soul 
treat his first love his mother like a queen
A good man is like a smooth piece of chocolate
that melt in his lady mouth that will leave 
A passionate after taste that will live a mark in her heart
A good man will hold his woman so tight 
it would leave foot prints across the chest like a memory
A good man will treasure his lady before his fellow men 
What's a good man you may ask 
A good man will make sure lover needs will be accomplish & pleased
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Y. Avatar
November 25, 2016 at 8:45 AM
Hi Patrice, Congrats on your win. It was well deserved. :-) Alexis
Jackson Avatar
November 25, 2016 at 9:35 AM
Thank you Alexis... I really appreciate you response...
Teagan Avatar
November 24, 2016 at 11:13 PM
Yes! This is definitely a good man! "Like a smooth piece of chocolate" :) I love this. Congratulations on your win!
Jackson Avatar
November 25, 2016 at 12:02 AM
Hello Rebecca thank you for your response.... I really appreciate you for taking the time out for reading my poetry...
Raynes Avatar
November 24, 2016 at 9:09 PM
Congratulations Patrice, this is an honest poem with real thoughts, a great write.
Y. Avatar
November 2, 2016 at 9:16 PM
WoW! That is most definitely a good man. It would be a blessing to meet a man like you described. Well done. I wish you the best of luck in the contest:-) Alexis
Jackson Avatar
November 2, 2016 at 11:17 PM
Thank you so much Alexis for your input it was very appreciate sorry for just responding. I just realize how to. LOL
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