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Whatcha Thinkin

Whatcha Thinkin? by Barbara C. Agarwal If you're thinkin 'bout me Then I'll let you be. But you're thinkin 'bout her I'm gonna change your thinkin, Sir: Kiss you all around And up n down til you beg me Beg me for more sugar-- Sugar sweeter than mercy-- You'll beg me for your brain, Beg me to recall your own name, Beg me—you'll see--'gonna, 'Gonna make your mind whir, 'Gonna do one thing for sure, Sir: 'Gonna letcha make my body purr So you just think about me, And no more thinkin bout her--

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 2/21/2015 8:36:00 PM

Hi Barbara, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun in this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets, who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I want to be the first to invite you on over to the contest page. I OFFER MY CONTEST in hopes it inspires you in some way. I will enjoy following you and your poetry:) This is a great way to get through the year. Lucky Us, To Have you. Enjoy 2015, with New Poet Friends! @-> LINDA <-@

Skat A

Date: 2/20/2015 10:11:00 PM

Barbara, Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will get much delight in reading and in time become familiar with your verse. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT