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Whatcha Bin Smokin' Boy

Marshmallow dreams, puffy white clouds Whatcha bin smokin' boy Get back to reality for crying out loud Whatcha bin smokin' boy Peace on the planet, first time in history Whatcha bin smokin' boy Reason you're acting like this is a mystery Whatcha bin smokin' boy People loving people no matter their race Whatcha bin smokin' boy Got a big smirk on this time weathered face Whatcha bin smokin' boy Republicans and Democrats agreeing on stuff Whatcha bin smokin' boy Totally blown away sitting here in the buff Whatcha bin smokin' boy Now hang on a minute, there must be a way Whatcha bin smokin' boy Though men have failed forever and a day Whatcha bin smokin' boy Call me a dreamer, there's hope in my heart Whatcha bin smokin' boy Let's all set our sights on a shiny new start Start smokin' peace and joy! © Jack Ellison 2012

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Laura Breidenthal

Date: 9/18/2020 11:17:00 AM

"Let's all set our sights on a shiny new start"- amen to that. We must hold on to hope at all costs. I believe hope is what keeps me going. Always, Laura

Joe Inka

Date: 12/4/2012 12:01:00 PM

Loved it. Great rhyme, great message , great title. Though I do prefer brownies lol. Well done

Jack Ellison
Date: 12/4/2012 2:09:00 PM

LOL Thanks for the fun review, my friend! I appreciate it... cheers and good wishes, Jack

Susan Burd

Date: 11/28/2012 9:42:00 AM

pass the peace pipe, Jack!

Jack Ellison
Date: 11/29/2012 5:13:00 AM

They say if you can remember the sixties, you weren't there! Love Jack

Debbie Duncan

Date: 11/26/2012 7:47:00 PM

love it,,,,, your line: forever and a day" I used that back in 1970's in a few of my poem. ,,,, you have a great day ;}

Jack Ellison
Date: 11/26/2012 7:55:00 PM

Glad you liked it my dear Debbie! Much appreciated... love and hugs, Jack xox

Ilene Bauer

Date: 11/26/2012 6:28:00 PM

i love the repetition of the title (which is a great one!) - it adds so much to your poem. very nice!

Jack Ellison
Date: 11/26/2012 7:19:00 PM

A little bit of a departure from my usual silliness eh! LOL Thanks once more Ilene... love and hugs, Jack

Carl Fraser

Date: 11/26/2012 4:59:00 PM

Awesome Jack, i was smilin all thru it my friend, Carl

Jack Ellison
Date: 11/26/2012 7:14:00 PM

Mission accomplished the! Keep smiling and stay happy my friend! Cheers, Jack

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/26/2012 3:14:00 PM

I think we all need a little weed, bring it on and let the peace pipe be passed!! NICE.

Jack Ellison
Date: 11/26/2012 3:25:00 PM

LOL Right on my friend!!! THANKS Hugs, Jack

Carol Eastman

Date: 11/26/2012 2:57:00 PM

If you don't believe... You'll never get there. Way to go Jack!

Jack Ellison
Date: 11/26/2012 3:24:00 PM

You gotta believe one day mankind will finally get it right! I'll probably be long gone but for future generations, I still hold out hope! Love, Jack xox

Tanya Harrington

Date: 11/26/2012 1:20:00 PM

Thanks for passin' this along. :) enjoyed it. Tanya

Jack Ellison
Date: 11/26/2012 1:26:00 PM

Thanks Tanya... had fun with it! Big hugs, Jack xox

Russell Sivey

Date: 11/26/2012 11:30:00 AM

This is a tremendous and lovely write my friend! I really enjoyed reading this delightful and energetic poem this afternoon! What a fabulous and fantastic piece, Great Work!!

Jack Ellison
Date: 11/26/2012 1:13:00 PM

Many thanks Russell... your kind words are much appreciated!

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 11/26/2012 10:19:00 AM

Pass me a pipe full as well, this Poem is smokin hot Jack! Thanks for blowing some smoke in this direction.

Jack Ellison
Date: 11/26/2012 10:25:00 AM

Obviously those wee computer bugs did their nasty deeds again and sent you the reply meant for Owen! Going to squish them if I catch 'em! Look to your east, that dark cloud you see is 'peace and joy' smoke!

Jack Ellison
Date: 11/26/2012 10:20:00 AM

Much appreciated Owen... thanks! Have a great day, Jack

Toquyen Harrell

Date: 11/26/2012 6:16:00 AM

Lol, you are too much, Jack. Yeah, "whatcha bin smokin'"? Just kidding. We need more dreamer like you :) Love ya, Toquyen

Jack Ellison
Date: 11/26/2012 6:20:00 AM

"Dream Along With Me!"... Perry Como's theme song! Love and big hugs from Jack the Dreamer! LOL

David Williams

Date: 11/26/2012 5:14:00 AM

Jack whatever it is it's great..David

Jack Ellison
Date: 11/26/2012 5:22:00 AM

"whatever it is it's great"... ROTFLMAO!