What You've Done

You know what you've done 
What you've done to me 
You know that you've done it 
Quite intentionally
You filled all my senses
Left me enchanted
Made me desire you
Until I can't stand it
You pulled me out of the mud
Dragged me out of the mire
Made sure that you 
Were all I desired
Enraptured by your voice
Captivated in your beauty 
Chained by your love
This is what you've done to me 
I know what you've done
I've always seen it coming
But I don't mind a bit
So great is your loving
So I'll play the fool
Glad to be deceived
If that what it takes
To keep you with me
Copyright © | Year Posted 2026

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September 26, 2026 at 8:35 AM
I've really been enjoying your poem and the emotions and imagery were so vivid that i could easily picture them as beautiful illustration. I'm a commission-based manga/webtoon artist,and I’d love to discuss the possibility of bringing this poem to life if you're ever interested. Feel free to reach out at gm@il : akiracomicart2@ or on inst@: akiraa_artly
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