What You Took

You left my heart in pieces the day you stole my life. My tears have made a puddle on my kitchen floor. The puddle became a lake and I went for a swim. I swam out to the middle of that lake. I became tired and exhausted. I felt myself fall deeper into the water. I can’t breathe, I begin to panic. I try to scream, but my lungs fill with water. I feel myself go deeper still. I struggle and sink lower. I close my eyes and know that this is it. I am going to die. I open my eyes and I am in the kitchen. I never die, but I want to. You took my life when you took my heart.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012



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Date: 4/17/2012 7:53:00 AM
Such a sad but GOOD poem hope to hear more from you !!! Check out a few of my poems too .~Akira
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Ryan Hebets
Date: 4/17/2012 8:07:00 AM
I'll check out some of them. And thank you.
Date: 4/17/2012 6:39:00 AM
Such a sad poem...
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Ryan Hebets
Date: 4/17/2012 8:07:00 AM
It comes from the heart.
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