What You See In the Mirror

Your mind your thoughts, they are you

What you see in a mirror is not so true

Its what you are thinking

That makes you feel good

Think about this, you really should

Its how you feel,what people perceive

Its your vibrational energy, do believe

If your on a low, that's where you'll go

And all that surrounds you, are on the same flow

I know you've been there many a time

What brought you back, was it your mind?

Yes it was your mind for sure

You had had enough in that state

Only you had the power to open the gate

And set yourself free

To come back to reality

Feeling happy is a natural state to be

If only you realise the power in you

A prolonged thought, will come true

But must be held with passion and feeling

Take this on trust, cause seeings believing

When you feel wonderful, and life is great

The world around you will flow in this state

But to keep it there and not fall back

you must Never ever think of lack

This is something you've never done before

Cast every bad thought out the door

Every moment of every day

Positive thoughts must be in play

Its hard to do at first I know

You must keep battling on

Its when your thinking positive thoughts

Nothing can go wrong

You will slip at times, but that's OK

If you get back on track straight away

For that is where you will find

The creation of all your desires

HELD WITHIN YOUR MIND!!!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009


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Date: 2/23/2010 5:29:00 AM
Loved it!
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Date: 2/11/2010 4:00:00 AM
Very nice & awesome write
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Date: 2/9/2010 9:11:00 AM
Dear Simone, I read YOUR Comments to Lynette Chachere's POEM " -Your True Reflection- " YOU have written a Magnificent From the mind (through the Heart) poem here I enjoyed the walk through the mind Superb Write ALWAYS...HG
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Date: 12/18/2009 6:41:00 AM
Great Poem
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Date: 12/8/2009 9:58:00 PM
have you read the novel "The Secret" it speaks about how all creations are developed within your thoughts and your mind.you just have to learn to control your thoughts.i like your poetry, it's sounds wise, and very powerful with honesty. -Always Lynette
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Date: 12/4/2009 11:36:00 AM
OH SO TRUE!! WITHIN YOUR MIND YOU CAN DO OR BE WHAT YOU WISH. THEN THE BODY WILL FOLLOW. LOVED THE WRITE. KEEP YOUR MIND STRONG. LOVE DONALD . donald.roddy@yahoo.com. just in case.
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Date: 12/1/2009 8:20:00 AM
wooow!!!! it's all amazing , every line has it's effect . it's very deap & awesomely brilliant :) Noura ,
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Date: 11/11/2009 12:35:00 PM
Hi! im new to poetry soup my name is zakhyrah and im 10years old i love all your poems, i read all of them,but if you want to read my poems you have to go to new poems by poet-and click on anesha brailsford because i could not log in and i don't have a email address thats a job but im to young to have an email address and a job.
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Date: 11/7/2009 2:17:00 PM
What a terrific tale, Simone, and yes, we have an instant connection... I AM a mind person too... the Woe is Me poem was written back in the 70's and its before I perfexted my mental abilities... thankxxx for these words.. my call letters stand for: Poetess Extraordinaire' and Poetry Soup "Sweetheart" its per HGarvey Daniel Esquire who wrote me a tribute recently.. check out his Daffy Definitions.. cool to join in the fun.. Linda-Marie, P.E.P.S. "Sweetheart:
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Date: 11/2/2009 7:19:00 AM
Yes Simone, as humans we are dealing with two different metaphoric trees. The tree of life, is the love of God from our hearts, the tree of strife, between good and evil, is the duality of the mind, the seeds of death. Have a nice day, God bless, Sincerely, Moses
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Date: 11/1/2009 7:25:00 PM
Simone positive thoughts, which is what you are talking about here, are at first generated from the Sacred heart, and then transferred into the mind. These positive thoughts are of the higher logic of God (c. Isaiah 55:8-9) from the very core of your being, they are not mind generated, if they were they could only be the lower carnal mind logic. Not thoughts of positive Love. Please if you have any more questions, feel free to ask. Sincerely, Moses
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Date: 11/1/2009 12:11:00 PM
Hi Simone as per your request you can reach my other site on poetrypoem.com/poet3238
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Date: 10/30/2009 12:11:00 PM
Hi Simone, This poem is truly powerful medicine for the soul and I am amazed how you are able to convey these images within our minds in such a way to remind us all to look beyond the mirror that is on the wall. Because there is something way more powerful and that is the power to have ability to instill positive thoughts into our minds, because it gives us the opportunity to can climb above it all so that we can truly appreciate all the beautiful things that life can offer :) Dean
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Date: 10/29/2009 1:47:00 PM
This so good! I thought I was the only one who could write about the mind so accurately lol My favorite
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Date: 10/28/2009 9:17:00 PM
heild with your mind i like, but the most love the powerful love is to feel it in your heart nice poem love jordan
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Date: 10/28/2009 3:52:00 PM
Oh, Wonderful Poem Indeed... Advice that leaves an Impression ... A Good One ... Going into my Favorites ( I've Got A Few Minutes - so On To The Next One) ... MoonBee
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Date: 10/27/2009 1:14:00 PM
Another batch of delightful poems Simone, thank you for sharing >> James
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Date: 10/27/2009 9:47:00 AM
Deep message that is. Good script.
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