What You Do To Me

Yeah, yeah
See, see
My, my
What you do to me

Oh, no
You make me needy
Mesmerized
Your touch and beauty

Your fragrant scent
You drive me crazy
Wild flowered field
Lay in sweet daisies

Oh no
You stole my heart
Wanton lips
They can't live apart

Yeah, yeah
See, see
My, my
What you do to me

Yeah, yeah
See, see
My, my
What you do to me!

~Lyric Man

Note: Just a fun upbeat dance tune that celebrates the spirit of being completely taken by someone.. it’s such a good kind of crazy!!
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Melugin Avatar
September 9, 2018 at 10:48 AM
LM Good kind of crazy!!!! and that's a hit title! You hook 'em and book 'em!
Pruitt Avatar
September 5, 2018 at 8:27 PM
What an enchanting celebration Lyric Man. It suits you. All the best, Reta
Beckman  Avatar
August 31, 2018 at 8:40 PM
Great piece! Very catchy!
Messina Avatar
August 30, 2018 at 2:49 PM
Hey hey, my my...you've created a fun fun poem and I like like it a lot lot. Well done as always, LM
Kiser Avatar
August 30, 2018 at 1:18 PM
Really cool piece with some wonderful sentiments. Well done.
Wheatley Avatar
August 29, 2018 at 7:08 PM
I found myself singing in my head. Very nice!
Vines Avatar
August 29, 2018 at 10:21 AM
What a Fun write...like it!!
Mcguire Avatar
August 29, 2018 at 12:09 AM
Like it!
Nicole Avatar
August 28, 2018 at 1:27 PM
I am captivated! :) This is a wonderful melody. It is love, when just the thought of someone can leave you breathless. ~ Brandy
Gentile Avatar
August 28, 2018 at 1:07 PM
and what fun to be mesmerized, Lyric man!! Indeed a fun, upbeat write! I had fun reading it this afternoon !!
Chircop Avatar
August 28, 2018 at 7:51 AM
'What you do to me' - My my what an intriguing title...And it was only the beginning to this beautiful song..Love it.
Trifiatis Avatar
August 28, 2018 at 7:40 AM
Head over heals situation? Well depicted dear, Lyric!
Babbit Avatar
August 27, 2018 at 12:31 PM
Going back, neato man.
Onclaud Avatar
August 27, 2018 at 12:07 PM
how carefree, D... yeah, yeah, yeah!...huggs
Smith Avatar
August 27, 2018 at 11:06 AM
Fun little ditty...perfect for the end of summer
Pandit Avatar
August 27, 2018 at 7:07 AM
Feels like fun..dance away LM..well done!
Mcguire Avatar
August 26, 2018 at 10:02 PM
Yes a good kind of crazy. Love it.
Ashley Avatar
August 26, 2018 at 9:28 PM
Your vibrant and passionate refrain has a very catchy hook to it Lyric Man.. The magic of love is enchanting in your captivating lyric my friend. I so enjoyed this rhythmic piece this evening. Warmest wishes always.. ~Susan
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