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What You Do To Me

Yeah, yeah See, see My, my What you do to me Oh, no You make me needy Mesmerized Your touch and beauty Your fragrant scent You drive me crazy Wild flowered field Lay in sweet daisies Oh no You stole my heart Wanton lips They can't live apart Yeah, yeah See, see My, my What you do to me Yeah, yeah See, see My, my What you do to me! ~Lyric Man Note: Just a fun upbeat dance tune that celebrates the spirit of being completely taken by someone.. it’s such a good kind of crazy!!

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Chuck Melugin

Date: 9/9/2018 10:48:00 AM

LM Good kind of crazy!!!! and that's a hit title! You hook 'em and book 'em!

Reta Pruitt

Date: 9/5/2018 8:27:00 PM

What an enchanting celebration Lyric Man. It suits you. All the best, Reta

Nancy Beckman

Date: 8/31/2018 8:40:00 PM

Great piece! Very catchy!

Charles Messina

Date: 8/30/2018 2:49:00 PM

Hey hey, my my...you've created a fun fun poem and I like like it a lot lot. Well done as always, LM

M. L. Kiser

Date: 8/30/2018 1:18:00 PM

Really cool piece with some wonderful sentiments. Well done.

Alycia Wheatley

Date: 8/29/2018 7:08:00 PM

I found myself singing in my head. Very nice!

Deborah Vines

Date: 8/29/2018 10:21:00 AM

What a Fun write...like it!!

Timothy Mcguire

Date: 8/29/2018 12:09:00 AM

Like it!

Brandy Nicole

Date: 8/28/2018 1:27:00 PM

I am captivated! :) This is a wonderful melody. It is love, when just the thought of someone can leave you breathless. ~ Brandy

Mike Gentile

Date: 8/28/2018 1:07:00 PM

and what fun to be mesmerized, Lyric man!! Indeed a fun, upbeat write! I had fun reading it this afternoon !!

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 8/28/2018 7:51:00 AM

'What you do to me' - My my what an intriguing title...And it was only the beginning to this beautiful song..Love it.

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 8/28/2018 7:40:00 AM

Head over heals situation? Well depicted dear, Lyric!

Dm Babbit

Date: 8/27/2018 12:31:00 PM

Going back, neato man.

Nette Onclaud

Date: 8/27/2018 12:07:00 PM

how carefree, D... yeah, yeah, yeah!...huggs

Tim Smith

Date: 8/27/2018 11:06:00 AM

Fun little ditty...perfect for the end of summer

Vijay Pandit

Date: 8/27/2018 7:07:00 AM

Feels like fun..dance away LM..well done!

Timothy Mcguire

Date: 8/26/2018 10:02:00 PM

Yes a good kind of crazy. Love it.

Susan Ashley

Date: 8/26/2018 9:28:00 PM

Your vibrant and passionate refrain has a very catchy hook to it Lyric Man.. The magic of love is enchanting in your captivating lyric my friend. I so enjoyed this rhythmic piece this evening. Warmest wishes always.. ~Susan