Pandita Sietesantos Poet Pantoum

What Will Tomorrow Bring

What will Tomorrow Bring

Hoping for Rainbows

Hoping for rainbows after rain, 				
wind-blown rose petals of red.  				
Petals pierced by thorns of pain				
like butterflies’ wings spread.				

Wind-blown rose petals of red,				
bleeding from a broken heart				
like butterflies’ wings spread…				
remnants of love ripped apart.				

Bleeding from a broken heart,				
petals pierced by thorns of pain.				
Remnants of love ripped apart…			
hoping for rainbows after rain.			


06-08-2017

Contest:      What will Tomorrow Bring - Pantoum
Sponsor:      Eve Roper
Placement:   3rd

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Darlene De Beaulieu February 4, 2018 at 8:30 PM Hello Pandita,when it rains with the sun shining, it brings a rainbow.This poem is beautiful and you wrote this poem very well. have a nice evening my friend. Darlene De Beaulieu February 6, 2018 at 8:39 PM Hugs to you my friend. Pandita Sietesantos February 6, 2018 at 11:32 AM Thank you so much dear Darlene for the visit and for your lovely compliment! Hugs. Pandita

Susan Ashley October 5, 2017 at 8:18 PM Ohh what an emotional and beautiful pantoum Pandita. Lovely lines of sad heartfelt imagery. Very evocative, wonderful and moving. Totally enjoyed. A belated congrats! Warmest regards my lovely friend :) Pandita Sietesantos October 6, 2017 at 9:58 AM Thank you so much, Sweet Susan, I greatly appreciate your wonderful compliment and continued support for my work. Best wishes for a wonderful weekend and hugs, my friend. Pandita

James Edward Lee Sr. September 14, 2017 at 1:46 AM Simply wonderful/such a great write James :D Pray all well in your life. Miss your verse! Pandita Sietesantos September 14, 2017 at 12:15 PM Dear James, thank you again for supporting my works and encouraging me as I haven't been very active lately due to other pressing commitments. However, I promise to submit some pieces real soon:-)! Hugs. Pandita

Dorian Petersen Potter August 1, 2017 at 7:29 PM Very beautiful Pantoum poem, Pandita!:))Well written!Be blessed!:) D. Pandita Sietesantos August 2, 2017 at 9:12 AM Awwww! You are so sweet and I thank you for your kind compliments! Best regards and hugs dear Dorian! Pandita

Eve Roper July 4, 2017 at 8:56 PM Congratulations on your win, Pandita, thank you for entering my contest ~* Pandita Sietesantos July 4, 2017 at 10:00 PM Eve, thank you so much! I am very delighted that you chose this piece to be on your list of winners! Hugs. Pandita

John Lawless July 4, 2017 at 8:40 AM A sharp, staccato, piercing write Pandita. Perfect metaphor for the broken heart Pandita Sietesantos July 4, 2017 at 9:04 AM My friend, John, I so very much appreciate your compliment! Thank you so much for stopping by! Hugs. Pandita

Pashang Salehi June 27, 2017 at 12:45 PM Beautiful Pandita, remember the rainbow comes after a storm. Remember what are you wishing for? Pandita Sietesantos June 30, 2017 at 12:47 PM Hi Pashang, I so very much appreciate your comment and compliment! Thank you for stopping by! Hugs. Pandita

James Inman June 26, 2017 at 8:39 AM A beauty Pandita. I love the choice of first and final line. Pandita Sietesantos June 30, 2017 at 12:46 PM Thank you so much James for the visit and for your lovely compliment! Hugs. Pandita

Elizabeth Kinch June 17, 2017 at 7:04 AM Wow, this is fabulous. I always hope for rainbows after rain. Pandita Sietesantos June 18, 2017 at 3:25 PM Hi Elizabeth, I greatly appreciate your wonderful compliment! Thank you for stopping by! Best wishes and hugs. Pandita

Andrea Dietrich June 14, 2017 at 3:36 PM very beautifully done, Pandita. Great imagery. Pandita Sietesantos June 14, 2017 at 3:47 PM I so very much appreciate your great compliment, Andie! Thank you so much for stopping by! Hugs. Pandita

Moon Flower June 13, 2017 at 12:35 AM Hi Pandita. This is such a nicely written Pantoum. Keep it up. 7 here. Pandita Sietesantos June 13, 2017 at 10:01 AM Hi Moon Flower, thank you so very much for your high praises and score which mean a lot to me! All the very best to you! Pandita

Vladislav Raven June 11, 2017 at 7:51 PM Hi Pandita, what does one say about your excellent poem in the Pantoum form? Your words flow so wonderfully in this form, they are gentle and beautiful and the Pantoum form is so gentle. Sadness can have the deepest beauty when written well. All tomorrows sing a brand new song. The art is always in making the song yours. Rainbows come from the heart. This is a definite fave, an excellent Pantoum. Hugs....Mike. XX Pandita Sietesantos June 12, 2017 at 12:08 PM Awww! thank you so much for your kind, complimentary words that warm my heart! As always, your compliments mean so much to me, my friend. Hugs. Pandita

Kika Ayala June 10, 2017 at 2:01 PM Pandita, that's an eternal question especially for the brokenhearted who want to find the rainbow of hope! Beautiful piece - good luck in the contest! Hugs. Kika Pandita Sietesantos June 12, 2017 at 12:07 PM Thank you so much Kika for the visit and for your lovely compliment! Pandita

Dean Wood June 8, 2017 at 2:52 PM Very nice Pandita. These are hard to write! Nice job. - Dean Pandita Sietesantos June 9, 2017 at 11:06 AM Hi Dean, thank you for visiting and thank you for your kind complimentary words, my friend! Best wishes. Pandita

Chris Green June 8, 2017 at 9:12 AM This was great, you did this so well. I love how this ended. Pandita Sietesantos June 9, 2017 at 11:02 AM Chris, thank you for your sweet compliment that I appreciate! Pandita

Tim Smith June 8, 2017 at 8:54 AM Beautiful piece Pandita Pandita Sietesantos June 9, 2017 at 10:54 AM Thank you so much Tim for the visit and for your lovely compliment! Pandita

Kim Rodrigues June 8, 2017 at 8:43 AM Nice pantoum! Pandita Sietesantos June 9, 2017 at 10:52 AM Hi Kim, I'm so glad you like this one! Thank you, my friend! Pandita