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What Will Tomorrow Bring

What will Tomorrow Bring

Hoping for Rainbows

Hoping for rainbows after rain, 				
wind-blown rose petals of red.  				
Petals pierced by thorns of pain				
like butterflies’ wings spread.				

Wind-blown rose petals of red,				
bleeding from a broken heart				
like butterflies’ wings spread…				
remnants of love ripped apart.				

Bleeding from a broken heart,				
petals pierced by thorns of pain.				
Remnants of love ripped apart…			
hoping for rainbows after rain.			


06-08-2017

Contest:      What will Tomorrow Bring - Pantoum
Sponsor:      Eve Roper
Placement:   3rd

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Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 2/4/2018 8:30:00 PM

Hello Pandita,when it rains with the sun shining, it brings a rainbow.This poem is beautiful and you wrote this poem very well. have a nice evening my friend.

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 2/6/2018 8:39:00 PM

Hugs to you my friend.

Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 2/6/2018 11:32:00 AM

Thank you so much dear Darlene for the visit and for your lovely compliment! Hugs. Pandita

Susan Ashley

Date: 10/5/2017 8:18:00 PM

Ohh what an emotional and beautiful pantoum Pandita. Lovely lines of sad heartfelt imagery. Very evocative, wonderful and moving. Totally enjoyed. A belated congrats! Warmest regards my lovely friend :)

Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 10/6/2017 9:58:00 AM

Thank you so much, Sweet Susan, I greatly appreciate your wonderful compliment and continued support for my work. Best wishes for a wonderful weekend and hugs, my friend. Pandita

James Edward Lee Sr.

Date: 9/14/2017 1:46:00 AM

Simply wonderful/such a great write James :D Pray all well in your life. Miss your verse!

Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 9/14/2017 12:15:00 PM

Dear James, thank you again for supporting my works and encouraging me as I haven't been very active lately due to other pressing commitments. However, I promise to submit some pieces real soon:-)! Hugs. Pandita

Dorian Petersen Potter

Date: 8/1/2017 7:29:00 PM

Very beautiful Pantoum poem, Pandita!:))Well written!Be blessed!:) D.

Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 8/2/2017 9:12:00 AM

Awwww! You are so sweet and I thank you for your kind compliments! Best regards and hugs dear Dorian! Pandita

Eve Roper

Date: 7/4/2017 8:56:00 PM

Congratulations on your win, Pandita, thank you for entering my contest ~*

Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 7/4/2017 10:00:00 PM

Eve, thank you so much! I am very delighted that you chose this piece to be on your list of winners! Hugs. Pandita

John Lawless

Date: 7/4/2017 8:40:00 AM

A sharp, staccato, piercing write Pandita. Perfect metaphor for the broken heart

Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 7/4/2017 9:04:00 AM

My friend, John, I so very much appreciate your compliment! Thank you so much for stopping by! Hugs. Pandita

Pashang Salehi

Date: 6/27/2017 12:45:00 PM

Beautiful Pandita, remember the rainbow comes after a storm. Remember what are you wishing for?

Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 6/30/2017 12:47:00 PM

Hi Pashang, I so very much appreciate your comment and compliment! Thank you for stopping by! Hugs. Pandita

James Inman

Date: 6/26/2017 8:39:00 AM

A beauty Pandita. I love the choice of first and final line.

Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 6/30/2017 12:46:00 PM

Thank you so much James for the visit and for your lovely compliment! Hugs. Pandita

Elizabeth Kinch

Date: 6/17/2017 7:04:00 AM

Wow, this is fabulous. I always hope for rainbows after rain.

Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 6/18/2017 3:25:00 PM

Hi Elizabeth, I greatly appreciate your wonderful compliment! Thank you for stopping by! Best wishes and hugs. Pandita

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/14/2017 3:36:00 PM

very beautifully done, Pandita. Great imagery.

Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 6/14/2017 3:47:00 PM

I so very much appreciate your great compliment, Andie! Thank you so much for stopping by! Hugs. Pandita

Moon Flower

Date: 6/13/2017 12:35:00 AM

Hi Pandita. This is such a nicely written Pantoum. Keep it up. 7 here.

Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 6/13/2017 10:01:00 AM

Hi Moon Flower, thank you so very much for your high praises and score which mean a lot to me! All the very best to you! Pandita

Vladislav Raven

Date: 6/11/2017 7:51:00 PM

Hi Pandita, what does one say about your excellent poem in the Pantoum form? Your words flow so wonderfully in this form, they are gentle and beautiful and the Pantoum form is so gentle. Sadness can have the deepest beauty when written well. All tomorrows sing a brand new song. The art is always in making the song yours. Rainbows come from the heart. This is a definite fave, an excellent Pantoum. Hugs....Mike. XX

Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 6/12/2017 12:08:00 PM

Awww! thank you so much for your kind, complimentary words that warm my heart! As always, your compliments mean so much to me, my friend. Hugs. Pandita

Kika Ayala

Date: 6/10/2017 2:01:00 PM

Pandita, that's an eternal question especially for the brokenhearted who want to find the rainbow of hope! Beautiful piece - good luck in the contest! Hugs. Kika

Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 6/12/2017 12:07:00 PM

Thank you so much Kika for the visit and for your lovely compliment! Pandita