What Will Tomorrow Bring

"What will tomorrow bring ?" he asked.
"Ah, you are young, yes, young indeed,"
Said the old man with an old smile.
"Tomorrow will bring yesterday's seed."

"Ah, you are young, yes, young indeed,
To see ahead, you must look back.
Tomorrow will bring yesterday's seed.
The future's from a small thin pack."

To see ahead you must look back.
You see what was planted in rows.
The future's from a small thin pack -
A tiny seed that grows and grows.

You see what was planted in rows -
Was it harsh or a loving smile?
A tiny seed that grows and grows -
It becomes large in quite a short while.

"Was it harsh or a loving smile?"
Said the old man with an old smile.
"It becomes large in quite a short while -
What will tomorrow bring?" he asked.

6/6/2017
for contest Pantoum Form: What Will Tomorrow Bring by Eve Roper
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Roper Avatar
July 4, 2017 at 8:17 PM
Larry, thank you for entering my contest, congratulations on your win ~*
Bradfield Avatar
July 4, 2017 at 9:18 PM
Thank you for the contest and the placement, Eve.Lots of fun I thought!
Lawless Avatar
July 4, 2017 at 8:24 AM
Larry, this reads like the prophetic philosophy with which a mentor of mine tormented me. Beautifully done, especially enjoyed the last quatrain(which could stand alone) and the subtle juxtaposition of the speakers....
Bradfield Avatar
July 4, 2017 at 9:21 PM
Thank you, John! You are a serious student of the art I can see. I'm quite flattered by your kind comments!!..Larry
Wood Avatar
June 8, 2017 at 3:04 PM
Larry, this is a home run. A 7 and a FAV from me. I love how you molded this difficult form. Wow! - Dean
Bradfield Avatar
June 8, 2017 at 3:45 PM
What a nice remark, Dean! You made my day...thanks!!
De Beaulieu Avatar
June 6, 2017 at 7:20 PM
Larry no one knows what tomorrow will bring.It is a mystery. I like the way the words flowed in this poem.
Bradfield Avatar
June 8, 2017 at 3:45 PM
Thank you, Darlene
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