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What Will Pass

Mother calls, for morning new, bless our way with lilting dew. Day bids night a fond adieu 2-21-2017 Triad in 7 Beats contest - Nette Onclaud

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Mario Vitale

Date: 10/2/2017 4:00:00 PM

https://youtu.be/sjnGtH7Oxjg Would you be so kind as to check out my newest poem entitled, "A Secret Place". It has been a work in progress since the fall of 1989 my email is : mariovitale227@yahoo.com. I'm featured on writerscafe, neopoet, all poetry, starlitfecafe and power poetry. Thank you kindly poet Mario William Vitale. 10/2/17

Mark Martin

Date: 3/12/2017 4:16:00 PM

Like the last line - great way to describe dawn! Congratulations Grant! :-)

Grant Norwood
Date: 3/20/2017 11:45:00 PM

Thank you Mark. Adieu!

Charlotte Puddifoot

Date: 2/28/2017 7:18:00 AM

nice catchy rhythm to this one - congrats on your win in the contest!

Grant Norwood
Date: 3/20/2017 11:44:00 PM

Thanks Charlotte. Appreciate the comments and sorry for delay in responding

Reason A. Poteet

Date: 2/27/2017 9:30:00 AM

Your piece takes me bacck to my childhood and mother's caution, "do not step in the dew barefooted, wear your shoes". My shoes were the plastic sandals or flipflops which did not stop the dew from invading the cuts on my feet. Thanks for the memory! Congratulations on a piece well-written and on your award.

Grant Norwood
Date: 2/27/2017 8:50:00 PM

Thanks. This made me happy, i like that it evokes pleasant memories. Thanks for the note

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/26/2017 6:49:00 PM

very sweetly rhymed, Grant. Congrats on your fine win.

Grant Norwood
Date: 2/27/2017 8:48:00 PM

Thanks for stopping by Andrea

Jan Allison

Date: 2/26/2017 4:07:00 PM

Very beautiful Grant congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx

Grant Norwood
Date: 2/26/2017 4:16:00 PM

Thank you Jan

Agnes Krampe

Date: 2/26/2017 2:33:00 PM

Coming back with congrats, Grant.

Grant Norwood
Date: 2/26/2017 4:17:00 PM

Appreciate it, thanks Agnes

Nette Onclaud

Date: 2/26/2017 11:17:00 AM

i tuned into this mellow poem with much delight, grant.. big cheers on your win and thanks for entering.. huggs

Grant Norwood
Date: 2/26/2017 4:18:00 PM

Thanks. Glad you liked it. Fun contest with gorgeous poems

Agnes Krampe

Date: 2/22/2017 6:54:00 AM

Beautiful, Grant - good luck in the contest.

Grant Norwood
Date: 2/22/2017 10:21:00 AM

thanks for stopping by again ;)

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 2/22/2017 5:25:00 AM

- Beautiful poem for this contest, Grant - Good luck - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Grant Norwood
Date: 2/22/2017 10:21:00 AM

thank you, appreciate the comments

Caycay Jennings

Date: 2/22/2017 4:10:00 AM

A unique take on the picture. I am fascinated by how unique each person's response is to the picture. This one has an intriguing individuated unique perspective that is worthy pausing to contemplate. Made me think! Good luck in all things ... CayCay

Grant Norwood
Date: 2/22/2017 10:26:00 AM

yes i think that is one of the beauties of life that we can look at the same thing and see or feel something from a different perspective. I appreciate your curiosity, its one of the best traits! thanks for your thoughts