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What Will Pass

Mother calls, for morning new,
bless our way with lilting dew.
Day bids night a fond adieu



2-21-2017
Triad in 7 Beats contest - Nette Onclaud

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Mario Vitale

October 2, 2017 at 4:00 PM

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Mark Martin

March 12, 2017 at 4:16 PM

Like the last line - great way to describe dawn! Congratulations Grant! :-)

Grant Norwood

March 20, 2017 at 11:45 PM

Thank you Mark. Adieu!

Charlotte Puddifoot

February 28, 2017 at 7:18 AM

nice catchy rhythm to this one - congrats on your win in the contest!

Grant Norwood

March 20, 2017 at 11:44 PM

Thanks Charlotte. Appreciate the comments and sorry for delay in responding

Reason A. Poteet

February 27, 2017 at 9:30 AM

Your piece takes me bacck to my childhood and mother's caution, "do not step in the dew barefooted, wear your shoes". My shoes were the plastic sandals or flipflops which did not stop the dew from invading the cuts on my feet. Thanks for the memory! Congratulations on a piece well-written and on your award.

Grant Norwood

February 27, 2017 at 8:50 PM

Thanks. This made me happy, i like that it evokes pleasant memories. Thanks for the note

Andrea Dietrich

February 26, 2017 at 6:49 PM

very sweetly rhymed, Grant. Congrats on your fine win.

Grant Norwood

February 27, 2017 at 8:48 PM

Thanks for stopping by Andrea

Jan Allison

February 26, 2017 at 4:07 PM

Very beautiful Grant congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx

Grant Norwood

February 26, 2017 at 4:16 PM

Thank you Jan

Agnes Krampe

February 26, 2017 at 2:33 PM

Coming back with congrats, Grant.

Grant Norwood

February 26, 2017 at 4:17 PM

Appreciate it, thanks Agnes

Nette Onclaud

February 26, 2017 at 11:17 AM

i tuned into this mellow poem with much delight, grant.. big cheers on your win and thanks for entering.. huggs

Grant Norwood

February 26, 2017 at 4:18 PM

Thanks. Glad you liked it. Fun contest with gorgeous poems

Agnes Krampe

February 22, 2017 at 6:54 AM

Beautiful, Grant - good luck in the contest.

Grant Norwood

February 22, 2017 at 10:21 AM

thanks for stopping by again ;)

Anne-Lise Andresen

February 22, 2017 at 5:25 AM

- Beautiful poem for this contest, Grant - Good luck - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Grant Norwood

February 22, 2017 at 10:21 AM

thank you, appreciate the comments

CayCay Godwin

February 22, 2017 at 4:10 AM

A unique take on the picture. I am fascinated by how unique each person's response is to the picture. This one has an intriguing individuated unique perspective that is worthy pausing to contemplate. Made me think! Good luck in all things ... CayCay

Grant Norwood

February 22, 2017 at 10:26 AM

yes i think that is one of the beauties of life that we can look at the same thing and see or feel something from a different perspective. I appreciate your curiosity, its one of the best traits! thanks for your thoughts

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