What Will It Take

It's killing her
Every pill, powder, plant she inhales
Her body is slowly shutting down
Doing more of it just to escape the pain

Her best friend standing off to the side
Completely helpless trying to climb over her walls
That she has put up and locked her out of
Leaving her to watch from the outside

What's left to do?
Nothing but watch
As it consumes her mind and body
Until there's nothing left but bones

What will it take?
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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October 23, 2013 at 9:05 AM
I knew a few like this. Watching someone you deeply care for, crumble so badly, is deeply heartbreaking. That sense of helplessness is just salt to the wound. Damn. May it get better somehow...strong message here.
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